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My heart is all fuzzy please finish This
My heart is all fuzzy please finish This
1/19/2012 c19 
1NeonTime
There is a lot of lovely stuff in this story. It's not perfect, sure, but interesting writing coupled with intriguing characters goes a long way. Though I have a sinking feeling that I will be disappointed in the end, that is if you ever do finish this :).
1NeonTimeThere is a lot of lovely stuff in this story. It's not perfect, sure, but interesting writing coupled with intriguing characters goes a long way. Though I have a sinking feeling that I will be disappointed in the end, that is if you ever do finish this :).
6/21/2011 c15 may
hey
this is a nice story
but so many names are thrown around, it's confusing!
Sometimes a name is mentioned and it's never used again/
characters are introduced quickly and randomly
also names of places are pushed into the pile too!
but i like KT, she's adorable 3
hey
this is a nice story
but so many names are thrown around, it's confusing!
Sometimes a name is mentioned and it's never used again/
characters are introduced quickly and randomly
also names of places are pushed into the pile too!
but i like KT, she's adorable 3
9/16/2009 c19 ghurl00
oh. vermonster, interesting. I would have one, thank you. lol. quite an interesting pair they are. I like it. it makes me want to read more. hope you update soon.:) can't wait. :D
oh. vermonster, interesting. I would have one, thank you. lol. quite an interesting pair they are. I like it. it makes me want to read more. hope you update soon.:) can't wait. :D
6/21/2009 c19 Waxpencil34
Hey. just dropping a line to let you know you're a fantastic writer. I love your story. Its really well written and its fun to see a quirky character as a main lead because I am such a quirky person myself! It's fun to read about KT's story and I really hope you update soon. As to critique: you write very well, descriptive but not in never-ending paragraphs that make you want to cry. your characters are well thought out and I haven't seen a mistake in names (such as: katie said: well katie, when its supposed to be matthew talking) which is something I really appreciate in a writer (it happens much too often for my taste). :) I had found this story a few months ago but just got back to it now (multiple chapters later...) to discover that it was just as good as i remembered it. keep up the good work! :) - WP34
Hey. just dropping a line to let you know you're a fantastic writer. I love your story. Its really well written and its fun to see a quirky character as a main lead because I am such a quirky person myself! It's fun to read about KT's story and I really hope you update soon. As to critique: you write very well, descriptive but not in never-ending paragraphs that make you want to cry. your characters are well thought out and I haven't seen a mistake in names (such as: katie said: well katie, when its supposed to be matthew talking) which is something I really appreciate in a writer (it happens much too often for my taste). :) I had found this story a few months ago but just got back to it now (multiple chapters later...) to discover that it was just as good as i remembered it. keep up the good work! :) - WP34
6/7/2009 c19 6
I've been waiting years, literally, for this to come out and I'm so happy it's finally here. This is wonderful. Keep on writing and I hope you update soon.
I've been waiting years, literally, for this to come out and I'm so happy it's finally here. This is wonderful. Keep on writing and I hope you update soon.
5/30/2009 c19 thatgirlisnotgrey
this is a very refreshing story in a sea of boring cliche's
i cant wait for you to update this
this is a very refreshing story in a sea of boring cliche's
i cant wait for you to update this
5/22/2009 c19 1DuchessYappingDog
I'm so excited! This is one of my all time favorite stories. It always puts a smile on my face (even when I want to murder Barron, like I did when I reread the last chapter). I hope this time, the progress between the two of them doesn't go backwards again. Keep your mouth in check, David-unless you're going to give KT a kissey! :D
1DuchessYappingDogI'm so excited! This is one of my all time favorite stories. It always puts a smile on my face (even when I want to murder Barron, like I did when I reread the last chapter). I hope this time, the progress between the two of them doesn't go backwards again. Keep your mouth in check, David-unless you're going to give KT a kissey! :D
5/22/2009 c19 hedwigisnotdead
i've totally forgotten what this is about, but i still felt a leap when i saw this was updated, because it's been sitting forlornly on my favourite list since FOREVER.
now you're making me read it all over again. =)
nice to see you updating,, this chapter was awesometimes and the vermonster sounds AMAZING.
i've totally forgotten what this is about, but i still felt a leap when i saw this was updated, because it's been sitting forlornly on my favourite list since FOREVER.
now you're making me read it all over again. =)
nice to see you updating,, this chapter was awesometimes and the vermonster sounds AMAZING.
5/22/2009 c19 3dairodair
E!
I'm so excited the update, finally. :D
It's was as usual well written.
I can't wait until the next chapter!
I hope that comes out sooner than this one did. ;]
3dairodairE!
I'm so excited the update, finally. :D
It's was as usual well written.
I can't wait until the next chapter!
I hope that comes out sooner than this one did. ;]
5/21/2009 c19 1MademoiselleS
Yay new chapter! I'm glad I subscribed to this story or else I wouldn't have known. Great chapter and I'm glad you liked my pseudo ending to the story before. I like how you're not rushing KT into a relationship with David and that he isn't confessing his "undying-love" for her the way other guys usually do in other stories. Um that's all the commentary I have right now since I'm a little brain dead from finals in my school lol. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter!
1MademoiselleSYay new chapter! I'm glad I subscribed to this story or else I wouldn't have known. Great chapter and I'm glad you liked my pseudo ending to the story before. I like how you're not rushing KT into a relationship with David and that he isn't confessing his "undying-love" for her the way other guys usually do in other stories. Um that's all the commentary I have right now since I'm a little brain dead from finals in my school lol. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter!
5/21/2009 c19 Michelle
Eh! Thank you so much for this update. I'm so excited to see you've returned to this story. I recently re-read it and wondered what was up. I'm graduating high school next week; this is a great present.
Eh! Thank you so much for this update. I'm so excited to see you've returned to this story. I recently re-read it and wondered what was up. I'm graduating high school next week; this is a great present.
5/21/2009 c19 8WithoutException
YOU'RE BACK!
Yay!
Woohoo!
Okay, it's out of my system. But seriously, I love this story, and I was afraid you had abandoned it. Is AVIT a real school/based on a real school? Your characters and story seem too real to be completely fictional (but I'm entirely uncreative, so I have no idea how this sort of thing works).
8WithoutExceptionYOU'RE BACK!
Yay!
Woohoo!
Okay, it's out of my system. But seriously, I love this story, and I was afraid you had abandoned it. Is AVIT a real school/based on a real school? Your characters and story seem too real to be completely fictional (but I'm entirely uncreative, so I have no idea how this sort of thing works).
5/15/2009 c18 1MademoiselleS
Aw it doesn't look like this story is gonna continue, so I'm just gonna assume Barron tries to win KT back, KT finds out it was only because Leslie rejected him, David punched Barron, David kisses KT and they all end up happily ever after (even though I know my assumptions make now sense whatsoever lol) but on the off chance that you do continue I think that your ending would be a bazillion times better...so please continue with the story. And on that ending note I bid you good day
1MademoiselleSAw it doesn't look like this story is gonna continue, so I'm just gonna assume Barron tries to win KT back, KT finds out it was only because Leslie rejected him, David punched Barron, David kisses KT and they all end up happily ever after (even though I know my assumptions make now sense whatsoever lol) but on the off chance that you do continue I think that your ending would be a bazillion times better...so please continue with the story. And on that ending note I bid you good day
3/24/2009 c18 leigh
this is a good story, even though it seems to be abandoned.
i checked your profile to see if you had said anything about it, and i noticed you said "beat duke on senior night... acc tournament" and such.
that leads me to believe you go to unc. if so, i have to let you know that i am obligated to hate you, as i am an nc state student. haha.
anyway, i hope you find the time or the motivation or whatever it is you feel you don't have enough of to finish this story. it's really good!
this is a good story, even though it seems to be abandoned.
i checked your profile to see if you had said anything about it, and i noticed you said "beat duke on senior night... acc tournament" and such.
that leads me to believe you go to unc. if so, i have to let you know that i am obligated to hate you, as i am an nc state student. haha.
anyway, i hope you find the time or the motivation or whatever it is you feel you don't have enough of to finish this story. it's really good!