for Blind Goats8/26/2005 c1 weatherbeaten
^^ that's cute. I like the cheese line...everyone likes cheese. Cheese is funny.I also like the second to last line...my more violent sence of humor there. Anyway, good job.
^^ that's cute. I like the cheese line...everyone likes cheese. Cheese is funny.I also like the second to last line...my more violent sence of humor there. Anyway, good job.
8/14/2005 c1 boomkapowgone
What a silly poem!
Silly in a good way, of course! Your poem made me laugh fit to burst, especially the line "As they run into your house and eat your cheese"...
I'll imagine the intended funny line was "And you wonder if they're really blind!" While that line was as hilarious as the rest of the poem, I laughed the most at the cheese line.
Perhaps it was the silly mental image I got to accompany the line!
What a silly poem!
Silly in a good way, of course! Your poem made me laugh fit to burst, especially the line "As they run into your house and eat your cheese"...
I'll imagine the intended funny line was "And you wonder if they're really blind!" While that line was as hilarious as the rest of the poem, I laughed the most at the cheese line.
Perhaps it was the silly mental image I got to accompany the line!
8/9/2005 c1 
7Hannah Jae
Sadly...
I remember this poem. :(
haha.
Can I just ask you one question?
What were you on? JK
It is cute!
7Hannah JaeSadly...
I remember this poem. :(
haha.
Can I just ask you one question?
What were you on? JK
It is cute!