for That Kat9/6/2011 c1 
3RiRi122
i just want to say that i think you are an amazing writer ! this was one of the first stories i read here on fictionpress and i never forgot about it ! yes it was that good ! it is y favourite storie ! great work :D
3RiRi122i just want to say that i think you are an amazing writer ! this was one of the first stories i read here on fictionpress and i never forgot about it ! yes it was that good ! it is y favourite storie ! great work :D
10/8/2009 c5 Purple Banana
This is a pretty good story so far, although it is a bit cliched. I think one of the main problems is that you haven't really gone too in depth with their characters, they're more flat than round. Also, you tend to subtly switch between 1st and 3rd person, but only occasionally. Good job and keep working.
This is a pretty good story so far, although it is a bit cliched. I think one of the main problems is that you haven't really gone too in depth with their characters, they're more flat than round. Also, you tend to subtly switch between 1st and 3rd person, but only occasionally. Good job and keep working.
9/25/2008 c20 emmerrzz
wow..that was so cute! omg! it was a very thrilling story that totally kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time! wow...fantastic! keep up the good work!
wow..that was so cute! omg! it was a very thrilling story that totally kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time! wow...fantastic! keep up the good work!
8/6/2008 c20 insomniatic reader
I must say that I absolutely LOVED this story. Not once was I bpred with the plot, the romance was awesome and so was the angst. I have NO idea why th amount of reviews is a low number. You did a great job with this, and you should have more than double of your reviews.
Loved it.
Keep writting.
I must say that I absolutely LOVED this story. Not once was I bpred with the plot, the romance was awesome and so was the angst. I have NO idea why th amount of reviews is a low number. You did a great job with this, and you should have more than double of your reviews.
Loved it.
Keep writting.
10/28/2007 c20 7LadyLush
i liked the story especially the last chapter but it did feel like it was rushed a bit because everythign happened a bit too fast that it wasnt believable but it was likeable
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7LadyLushi liked the story especially the last chapter but it did feel like it was rushed a bit because everythign happened a bit too fast that it wasnt believable but it was likeable
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7/12/2007 c20 heitea
Wow! I really liked your story. It was very sweet and timese suspenseful. I really enjoyed getting to know your characters. They seemed so real. I'll be sure to put you on my author alert. I only have only question. What did they fight over in the second grade. I really, really want to know. lol. :) Anyways, Bye.
Wow! I really liked your story. It was very sweet and timese suspenseful. I really enjoyed getting to know your characters. They seemed so real. I'll be sure to put you on my author alert. I only have only question. What did they fight over in the second grade. I really, really want to know. lol. :) Anyways, Bye.
6/22/2007 c6 49Pinkamoo
Coolies, they're both up now. I have suspicians..don't know if they are true or not however...Good job!
49PinkamooCoolies, they're both up now. I have suspicians..don't know if they are true or not however...Good job!
6/22/2007 c4 Pinkamoo
Ugh. This chapter is making me feel cold! :p Its cold where I live about now. I would hate to die in a freezer. I would freak out too.
Ugh. This chapter is making me feel cold! :p Its cold where I live about now. I would hate to die in a freezer. I would freak out too.
6/22/2007 c1 Pinkamoo
Good start! My brothers aren't that overprotective lol. Well they would kick someones ass if I TOLD them to, but otherwise they will leave me alone with it. I would freak out if attacked by a hand while I was changing.
Good start! My brothers aren't that overprotective lol. Well they would kick someones ass if I TOLD them to, but otherwise they will leave me alone with it. I would freak out if attacked by a hand while I was changing.