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8/9/2005 c1 1mUROCED
it's funny. the first time i read this thorugh, I thought in the end the first voice stopped talking because the second said please. but then I noticed it had said please before. I like the back and forth argument between them. It is very Gollum-like.
8/9/2005 c1 8Unknown Unnamed

It reminds me of myself. A lot. Horrificly, it really does remind me of myself.

I'm bi-polar, so I have manic and depressive episodes and this is what I go through all the time. I scare myself sometimes.

Geez. It's like all us poets belond in a loony bin together.

Okay, I'm being cynical.


Back to reviewing.

Very angry. Self-hating. Abusive. Raw. Uncut. Unrelenting. Dramatic.

Recipe to a great and wonderful poem.

You're my hero.


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