for Vignette 18/9/2005 c1 
1mUROCED
it's funny. the first time i read this thorugh, I thought in the end the first voice stopped talking because the second said please. but then I noticed it had said please before. I like the back and forth argument between them. It is very Gollum-like.
1mUROCEDit's funny. the first time i read this thorugh, I thought in the end the first voice stopped talking because the second said please. but then I noticed it had said please before. I like the back and forth argument between them. It is very Gollum-like.
8/9/2005 c1 8Unknown Unnamed
Whoa.
It reminds me of myself. A lot. Horrificly, it really does remind me of myself.
I'm bi-polar, so I have manic and depressive episodes and this is what I go through all the time. I scare myself sometimes.
Geez. It's like all us poets belond in a loony bin together.
Okay, I'm being cynical.
Sorry.
Back to reviewing.
Very angry. Self-hating. Abusive. Raw. Uncut. Unrelenting. Dramatic.
Recipe to a great and wonderful poem.
You're my hero.
~Stormy
8Unknown UnnamedWhoa.
It reminds me of myself. A lot. Horrificly, it really does remind me of myself.
I'm bi-polar, so I have manic and depressive episodes and this is what I go through all the time. I scare myself sometimes.
Geez. It's like all us poets belond in a loony bin together.
Okay, I'm being cynical.
Sorry.
Back to reviewing.
Very angry. Self-hating. Abusive. Raw. Uncut. Unrelenting. Dramatic.
Recipe to a great and wonderful poem.
You're my hero.
~Stormy