for One Day12/30/2011 c2 
5Disney Is Hardcore
Wait what? This last bit doesn't seem to follow logically on from the first part. I think you should at least have her coming back from Europe or something, it seems as of it's just been plonked in there.
5Disney Is HardcoreWait what? This last bit doesn't seem to follow logically on from the first part. I think you should at least have her coming back from Europe or something, it seems as of it's just been plonked in there.
4/29/2008 c2 7gulistala
Wait so they were exes before but then moved but got back together again?
This was an interesting story. I liked the relationship between the two both as friends and then as boyfriend/girlfriend, but especially the former.
But wow, she really does have no qualms about treating kids the same and therefore cursing them the same.
Keep up the good work!
gulistanlik
7gulistalaWait so they were exes before but then moved but got back together again?
This was an interesting story. I liked the relationship between the two both as friends and then as boyfriend/girlfriend, but especially the former.
But wow, she really does have no qualms about treating kids the same and therefore cursing them the same.
Keep up the good work!
gulistanlik
2/2/2006 c2 88multiples of six
This was cute.. I think I like the first chapter better, because they were adorable just as friends, but they seem to make a good couple, too. The Queen Titania thing was very, very weird. I love the "One night, one mortal".. haha.. uhm.. the thing with the food was weird.. but yeah. Nicely written. =)
88multiples of sixThis was cute.. I think I like the first chapter better, because they were adorable just as friends, but they seem to make a good couple, too. The Queen Titania thing was very, very weird. I love the "One night, one mortal".. haha.. uhm.. the thing with the food was weird.. but yeah. Nicely written. =)
11/24/2005 c2 Ivy
Wow. That was short. But interesting...
Oh I forgot to mention! I loved that kid scene from before! With the icecream man and the kid coming up to him and asking to try and get a free icecream.. AHHAHAHA so funny.
Also the great references to Lost from before as well. AHAHa.
Great writing =]
Wow. That was short. But interesting...
Oh I forgot to mention! I loved that kid scene from before! With the icecream man and the kid coming up to him and asking to try and get a free icecream.. AHHAHAHA so funny.
Also the great references to Lost from before as well. AHAHa.
Great writing =]
11/24/2005 c1 Ivy
Carter seems sweet... in a weird kind of way.
Didn't understand what the challenge thing was before, but now I do. Yay.
Next chapter!
Carter seems sweet... in a weird kind of way.
Didn't understand what the challenge thing was before, but now I do. Yay.
Next chapter!
9/3/2005 c1 Need 'n' Know
Oh, lots of f's, huh? Gawsh...
It's kinda all there, so I don't really have much to say.
Julia.
Oh, lots of f's, huh? Gawsh...
It's kinda all there, so I don't really have much to say.
Julia.
9/3/2005 c2 1XxDarkHeartxX
Aww how sweet! this was good! i'm hyper right now, ya know? After marching until ten last night, i was so tired, so i go to sleep, have a weird dream, wake up, and now i'm all set! loved this too, i love all your stuff!
1XxDarkHeartxXAww how sweet! this was good! i'm hyper right now, ya know? After marching until ten last night, i was so tired, so i go to sleep, have a weird dream, wake up, and now i'm all set! loved this too, i love all your stuff!
8/16/2005 c2 6McQuinn
Cute, but I think it's (as you said) unnecessary. I like it as a one-shot. But still, amusing situation and great, lively, lovable characters. Great work.
6McQuinnCute, but I think it's (as you said) unnecessary. I like it as a one-shot. But still, amusing situation and great, lively, lovable characters. Great work.
8/16/2005 c1 McQuinn
GAH! I loove it! I absolutely adore it. Your characters, the excessive cursing, the humor, the friendship...everything is completely *squee* in this story.
I do have a few criticisms, though, concerning grammar, tense changing, and a lot of other things, but it is currently 2:41 in the AM and I'm much too tired to go over the details. I'm heading over to chapter 2 and basically mozying on to bed.
Ooh, by the way, I love your use of the quotes - "Nay, I say"; "I'm leaving you for porn"; and "Wake me when it's over." My best friend wrote that challenge and I know she'll have a laugh or two when reading this. Thanks so much for signing up for the OF ficathon. I hope you enjoyed it.
GAH! I loove it! I absolutely adore it. Your characters, the excessive cursing, the humor, the friendship...everything is completely *squee* in this story.
I do have a few criticisms, though, concerning grammar, tense changing, and a lot of other things, but it is currently 2:41 in the AM and I'm much too tired to go over the details. I'm heading over to chapter 2 and basically mozying on to bed.
Ooh, by the way, I love your use of the quotes - "Nay, I say"; "I'm leaving you for porn"; and "Wake me when it's over." My best friend wrote that challenge and I know she'll have a laugh or two when reading this. Thanks so much for signing up for the OF ficathon. I hope you enjoyed it.
8/16/2005 c2 35pixy-dizzy
Aaw.
Short, sweet, and simple. I wish there was more because I love this so much, but I guess that more would only add baggage to this story. Go you!
35pixy-dizzyAaw.
Short, sweet, and simple. I wish there was more because I love this so much, but I guess that more would only add baggage to this story. Go you!