for One Day8/16/2005 c2 
1Eudoxus
Aww.. That makes me feel all warm and giggly inside XD I don't think it's unnecessary, I think it's short, sweet, and to the point. It wraps everything up nicely and adds a feeling of contentment with a dash of good humor. Nice work :D
1EudoxusAww.. That makes me feel all warm and giggly inside XD I don't think it's unnecessary, I think it's short, sweet, and to the point. It wraps everything up nicely and adds a feeling of contentment with a dash of good humor. Nice work :D
8/15/2005 c2 selene909
This was really good. The dialogue felt quite realistic. I actually felt like I was intruding on someone's friendship. Great writing.
This was really good. The dialogue felt quite realistic. I actually felt like I was intruding on someone's friendship. Great writing.
8/14/2005 c1 Silver
Man, someone I'm picking all the best fics to read tonight! I'm looking forward to reading part two of this.
Man, someone I'm picking all the best fics to read tonight! I'm looking forward to reading part two of this.
8/13/2005 c1 3TurtleGoddess
I love this; it's really funny and realistic. I hope you'll put the second part up soon!
3TurtleGoddessI love this; it's really funny and realistic. I hope you'll put the second part up soon!
8/11/2005 c1 35pixy-dizzy
Loving this story and even loving the swearing because it makes it seem so much more real. The relationship between Bee and Carter just seems so freaking REAl! *squeals* Gah, but I love this already. And now I want a relationship like Bee's with Carter. *sniffles* Poop, man. But still. this is such a fantastic story already...please post the second part soon! Muah. Love you and love this and I'm adding this to my favorites!
35pixy-dizzyLoving this story and even loving the swearing because it makes it seem so much more real. The relationship between Bee and Carter just seems so freaking REAl! *squeals* Gah, but I love this already. And now I want a relationship like Bee's with Carter. *sniffles* Poop, man. But still. this is such a fantastic story already...please post the second part soon! Muah. Love you and love this and I'm adding this to my favorites!
8/11/2005 c1 8Niccy
It's slightly different from the fics I usually read, but I actually really love what you wrote here. It flows well and your characters are great. It's a nice simple story and.. I don't really have anything else to say. :) Your dialogue is well done. Keep writing.
8NiccyIt's slightly different from the fics I usually read, but I actually really love what you wrote here. It flows well and your characters are great. It's a nice simple story and.. I don't really have anything else to say. :) Your dialogue is well done. Keep writing.
8/10/2005 c1 1Eudoxus
I liked it. I really, really liked it :D Of course, I can't say there's anything of yours I particularly dislike, can I? It's odd, I'm generally not a dialogue lover, but you manage to make it all flow smoothly and quickly, so it works well for you. Can't wait for the next part.
1EudoxusI liked it. I really, really liked it :D Of course, I can't say there's anything of yours I particularly dislike, can I? It's odd, I'm generally not a dialogue lover, but you manage to make it all flow smoothly and quickly, so it works well for you. Can't wait for the next part.
8/10/2005 c1 Negotiatrix
I really like the snapshots of a friendship you present here. I didn't feel that last bit was so out of place. It seems okay as a oneshot, though that doesn't stop me from wanting to read more of it! You do dialogue very well.
I really like the snapshots of a friendship you present here. I didn't feel that last bit was so out of place. It seems okay as a oneshot, though that doesn't stop me from wanting to read more of it! You do dialogue very well.