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8/16/2005 c2 1Eudoxus
Aww.. That makes me feel all warm and giggly inside XD I don't think it's unnecessary, I think it's short, sweet, and to the point. It wraps everything up nicely and adds a feeling of contentment with a dash of good humor. Nice work :D
8/15/2005 c2 selene909
This was really good. The dialogue felt quite realistic. I actually felt like I was intruding on someone's friendship. Great writing.
8/15/2005 c2 1Viv26
Great piece of writing, can't wait till the next!
8/15/2005 c2 5euphorix
short but sweet. :)
8/14/2005 c1 Silver
Man, someone I'm picking all the best fics to read tonight! I'm looking forward to reading part two of this.
8/13/2005 c1 3TurtleGoddess
I love this; it's really funny and realistic. I hope you'll put the second part up soon!
8/11/2005 c1 35pixy-dizzy
Loving this story and even loving the swearing because it makes it seem so much more real. The relationship between Bee and Carter just seems so freaking REAl! *squeals* Gah, but I love this already. And now I want a relationship like Bee's with Carter. *sniffles* Poop, man. But still. this is such a fantastic story already...please post the second part soon! Muah. Love you and love this and I'm adding this to my favorites!
8/11/2005 c1 8Niccy
It's slightly different from the fics I usually read, but I actually really love what you wrote here. It flows well and your characters are great. It's a nice simple story and.. I don't really have anything else to say. :) Your dialogue is well done. Keep writing.
8/10/2005 c1 1Eudoxus
I liked it. I really, really liked it :D Of course, I can't say there's anything of yours I particularly dislike, can I? It's odd, I'm generally not a dialogue lover, but you manage to make it all flow smoothly and quickly, so it works well for you. Can't wait for the next part.
8/10/2005 c1 Negotiatrix
I really like the snapshots of a friendship you present here. I didn't feel that last bit was so out of place. It seems okay as a oneshot, though that doesn't stop me from wanting to read more of it! You do dialogue very well.
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