for The Whipping Boy2/11/2016 c1 Guest
it is very intrestin the first page was very boring!
it is very intrestin the first page was very boring!
12/16/2014 c9 Deleteplease2day
This was an entertaining read. If you ever take it up again, I'm curious to find out what happens.
This was an entertaining read. If you ever take it up again, I'm curious to find out what happens.
9/14/2011 c9 FictionFan
What a cool story! Please update it!
What a cool story! Please update it!
7/28/2011 c9 GingaNinja
Update PLEEEEEAAAAAASSDSEEE, this story I'd AMAZING and you're a really good writer =D. Continue please =3 x
Update PLEEEEEAAAAAASSDSEEE, this story I'd AMAZING and you're a really good writer =D. Continue please =3 x
2/10/2010 c9 
5Lilith of the Dark
Please, love, you have to continue this!
I love how... um... determined Luc is. (I just LOVE Luc)
What exactly are they going to do with Ailyn anyway? Are they going to use him as their little mistress while they're on the run or something?
-Lilith
5Lilith of the DarkPlease, love, you have to continue this!
I love how... um... determined Luc is. (I just LOVE Luc)
What exactly are they going to do with Ailyn anyway? Are they going to use him as their little mistress while they're on the run or something?
-Lilith
1/8/2010 c9 athenaartisan
M tasty tasty. I hope you remember to come back and finish this. Please don't leave us hanging forever it too good. Love all your characters.
thanks for sharing it with us.
M tasty tasty. I hope you remember to come back and finish this. Please don't leave us hanging forever it too good. Love all your characters.
thanks for sharing it with us.
11/7/2009 c9 2CrazyWriter77
i quite like this story it sounds really interesting,i can't wait to read more ^^
2CrazyWriter77i quite like this story it sounds really interesting,i can't wait to read more ^^
7/20/2009 c9 rgrimes89
Arrg! You need to update this!
Scarily well written and majorly exciting. If I could bribe you to write another chapter then I would :)
Please consider continuing *puppy eyes*
Love H xx
Arrg! You need to update this!
Scarily well written and majorly exciting. If I could bribe you to write another chapter then I would :)
Please consider continuing *puppy eyes*
Love H xx
1/29/2009 c9 Night Innocence
I really liked the plot twist and Luc being the king's son!
Well, the deceased king's son.
Can't wait for more plot and m/m!
I really liked the plot twist and Luc being the king's son!
Well, the deceased king's son.
Can't wait for more plot and m/m!
12/20/2008 c9 5gummybaby
this story is awesome. so much intrigue...I look foward to reading more.
please update soon!
5gummybabythis story is awesome. so much intrigue...I look foward to reading more.
please update soon!
12/18/2008 c9 JerryOnigiri
I'm surprised the plan worked. I wonder what Luc is going to do with Ailyn. Thanks for the update!
I'm surprised the plan worked. I wonder what Luc is going to do with Ailyn. Thanks for the update!
12/8/2008 c8 Rebel-Angel6
Woot! Can't wait to read more
Woot! Can't wait to read more