for Fire Escape9/1/2005 c1 Bukowski IsThatz Foreman
I really think that this is incredible.I like the repetition, "How often have I...?"You actually have me pretty speachless. Remarkable!
I really think that this is incredible.I like the repetition, "How often have I...?"You actually have me pretty speachless. Remarkable!
8/30/2005 c1 
1dear rowan
though i like the basic jist of it, the second stanza could use some work. other than that id say its worthy, haha.
1dear rowanthough i like the basic jist of it, the second stanza could use some work. other than that id say its worthy, haha.
8/11/2005 c1 152xoxoMizzatxoxo
I think you are missing the word looked in the first line, but other then that it was a great poem! Please read and review!
152xoxoMizzatxoxoI think you are missing the word looked in the first line, but other then that it was a great poem! Please read and review!