for The Unconventional Fairy Tale1/11/2006 c1 
7Alankria
He he nice ending to a good poem. Well structued and rhymed, this flowed very naturally, but the content was best of all. I personally love happy endings but it doesn't mean everything should be clear sailing for the heroes, or that everything's painted in black or white. But you knew that. Congrats for a thoroughly enjoyable poem.
7AlankriaHe he nice ending to a good poem. Well structued and rhymed, this flowed very naturally, but the content was best of all. I personally love happy endings but it doesn't mean everything should be clear sailing for the heroes, or that everything's painted in black or white. But you knew that. Congrats for a thoroughly enjoyable poem.
11/19/2005 c1 Sally-andersonn
i love the idea and the examples. THey rhymes were good but sounded a little ittle bit forced. It was good but the style of writing was a little hard to read for me. Anway, enjoyable to read.
i love the idea and the examples. THey rhymes were good but sounded a little ittle bit forced. It was good but the style of writing was a little hard to read for me. Anway, enjoyable to read.
11/11/2005 c1 9ice flyer
Great poem! THe rhyming is infectious and flows excellently and while I think the part about going past the stereotypes should have been longer, it was all very well-phrased. "Sidekicks and mentors are all safe and sound/While villains lie cold six feet under the ground" I think just "underground" would sound better. But anyways, awesome!
9ice flyerGreat poem! THe rhyming is infectious and flows excellently and while I think the part about going past the stereotypes should have been longer, it was all very well-phrased. "Sidekicks and mentors are all safe and sound/While villains lie cold six feet under the ground" I think just "underground" would sound better. But anyways, awesome!
10/5/2005 c1 1Burning Poetry
...You have fantastic humor poetry! Great rhyming: the flow didn't seem strange anywhere at all. I found this amusing, and way too true. And now I feel the need to write about a knight kissing a maid who turns into a toad. But I won't.
1Burning Poetry...You have fantastic humor poetry! Great rhyming: the flow didn't seem strange anywhere at all. I found this amusing, and way too true. And now I feel the need to write about a knight kissing a maid who turns into a toad. But I won't.
8/31/2005 c1 16Yasmina
no! it rhymes! i hate you. you're brilliant. the poem is brilliant. and it's fun. ^^
16Yasminano! it rhymes! i hate you. you're brilliant. the poem is brilliant. and it's fun. ^^
8/29/2005 c1 Clodhopper
This poem had me laughing so hard. I thought it was hilarious. I agree with Mack about the lines from "Or our hero's a woman" to "she turns into a toad"; that had me rolling.
~Ty
This poem had me laughing so hard. I thought it was hilarious. I agree with Mack about the lines from "Or our hero's a woman" to "she turns into a toad"; that had me rolling.
~Ty
8/26/2005 c1 min-ji91
AHAHA it's too true, there's no more to say about it. Great poem though. I still have the rhythm and rhyme bouncing around my head.
AHAHA it's too true, there's no more to say about it. Great poem though. I still have the rhythm and rhyme bouncing around my head.
8/23/2005 c1 1Clodhopper
okay, you got me, this is going on my favs page. It started out a little blah, a little okay. Nothing bad at all - actually important for the end to be so cool. From "Or our hero's a woman" to "she turns into a toad." - last line was especially wonderful. Oh this really is so good!
~Mack
1Clodhopperokay, you got me, this is going on my favs page. It started out a little blah, a little okay. Nothing bad at all - actually important for the end to be so cool. From "Or our hero's a woman" to "she turns into a toad." - last line was especially wonderful. Oh this really is so good!
~Mack
8/19/2005 c1 2temblance
Wow. This poem is awesome. The rhyming flowed really well, and that's unusual to see. I loved your choice of words, too, it added nicely to the rhythm.
And the ending was very good, bringing the poem to a complete close. I loved it.
2temblanceWow. This poem is awesome. The rhyming flowed really well, and that's unusual to see. I loved your choice of words, too, it added nicely to the rhythm.
And the ending was very good, bringing the poem to a complete close. I loved it.
8/16/2005 c1 Keaira
w00t! i liked this poem, especially the last line. i guess our circle story could be considered an unconventional fairytale...sort of. NIF!
w00t! i liked this poem, especially the last line. i guess our circle story could be considered an unconventional fairytale...sort of. NIF!
8/14/2005 c1 Math Maniac
That was greatness! It was the epitome of greatness! I absolutely loved it. Zero fault with this at all.
Fabulous!
That was greatness! It was the epitome of greatness! I absolutely loved it. Zero fault with this at all.
Fabulous!
8/12/2005 c1 Arielle
Unconventional Fairy tales Rock! you rock too. i luved your poem! can i have your autograph, please!
Unconventional Fairy tales Rock! you rock too. i luved your poem! can i have your autograph, please!
8/12/2005 c1 11Thoughtful Crisis
Yeah, I'm tired of the stereotype too, but I can't helping loving them...sometimes it's best to escape reality and drown in the stereotypes sometimes. I'm way too critical usually. Lol. Keep up the great work, nice vocabulary. I like your writing style!
11Thoughtful CrisisYeah, I'm tired of the stereotype too, but I can't helping loving them...sometimes it's best to escape reality and drown in the stereotypes sometimes. I'm way too critical usually. Lol. Keep up the great work, nice vocabulary. I like your writing style!