for Our Midnight Playground9/22/2005 c17 
136LilLaTLuv
Hey!
Oh, please, he likes her! He might be fighting it, but he likes her! GREAT! I loved this chappie! I'm so glad things are going good for her, at least, right now! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE?
Luv ya,Tashi :)
136LilLaTLuvHey!
Oh, please, he likes her! He might be fighting it, but he likes her! GREAT! I loved this chappie! I'm so glad things are going good for her, at least, right now! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE?
Luv ya,Tashi :)
9/22/2005 c17 6Pandemonium Express
This chapter was okay. It's kind of an aftermath chapter (or at least that's what it felt like to me). Sorry, I'm not as enthusiastic today, but I've caught the flu, so I'm rather less than hyper. ^^; But I still love the story and I can't wait for the next update!
6Pandemonium ExpressThis chapter was okay. It's kind of an aftermath chapter (or at least that's what it felt like to me). Sorry, I'm not as enthusiastic today, but I've caught the flu, so I'm rather less than hyper. ^^; But I still love the story and I can't wait for the next update!
9/22/2005 c17 3Red Orchid
As I said...I'm hooked. The chapter was so very cute and innocent. A good down time chapter after the big storm.
3Red OrchidAs I said...I'm hooked. The chapter was so very cute and innocent. A good down time chapter after the big storm.
9/22/2005 c1 Eugene
Please continue the story larentia. This story caught my attention and so I want to read more about this story. Though your grammar needs a little polishing, no offense, I really do like the story so go on and do your best. You've got a fan in me...
Please continue the story larentia. This story caught my attention and so I want to read more about this story. Though your grammar needs a little polishing, no offense, I really do like the story so go on and do your best. You've got a fan in me...
9/21/2005 c17 exquisite extreme
'Sweet dreams?
Oh, indeed.'
haha, i loved that line! it was great. i liked the chapter too; lots of ellie/donovan moments. too cute.
can't wait for the next update!
exquisite extreme
'Sweet dreams?
Oh, indeed.'
haha, i loved that line! it was great. i liked the chapter too; lots of ellie/donovan moments. too cute.
can't wait for the next update!
exquisite extreme
9/21/2005 c17 6summers-end
It was good.
The conversation was perfectly awkward in the perfect places.
I'm glad they got the "Us" cleared up. Except...I'm not sure if they exactly did. Are they officially together now? Or is it an awkward together-ness still?
The last sentence was fun! ;P
UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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6summers-endIt was good.
The conversation was perfectly awkward in the perfect places.
I'm glad they got the "Us" cleared up. Except...I'm not sure if they exactly did. Are they officially together now? Or is it an awkward together-ness still?
The last sentence was fun! ;P
UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
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9/21/2005 c17 theeighthhouse
so..they're...like together?sorry..i forget things because people take a while to update heheheheh cough =P
so..they're...like together?sorry..i forget things because people take a while to update heheheheh cough =P
9/21/2005 c17 murfdurf22
i really liked this chapter, so glad that you updated too, i'be been wating for a very long time for this update, don't leave us haning again!
i really liked this chapter, so glad that you updated too, i'be been wating for a very long time for this update, don't leave us haning again!
9/19/2005 c16 Kiara
Update soon! Please! Im in love with Donovan!
Update soon! Please! Im in love with Donovan!
9/18/2005 c16 7S. Renee
Hey! This is Renee (from DF). My essay's still not done, and I really should be working on it, but I couldn't help reading your story.
It's very cute, I must say. Ellie's a great character and I'm so glad that Steve is finally going to be taken away. He made me so mad! As for the Dylan/Donovan situation, it's so hard to choose which one is the best! At first I really liked Dylan and Donovan sort of got on my nerves, but now I think I'm practically falling for Donovan myself! Dylan's still really sweet though. They're both just perfect!
Update again soon!
7S. ReneeHey! This is Renee (from DF). My essay's still not done, and I really should be working on it, but I couldn't help reading your story.
It's very cute, I must say. Ellie's a great character and I'm so glad that Steve is finally going to be taken away. He made me so mad! As for the Dylan/Donovan situation, it's so hard to choose which one is the best! At first I really liked Dylan and Donovan sort of got on my nerves, but now I think I'm practically falling for Donovan myself! Dylan's still really sweet though. They're both just perfect!
Update again soon!
9/17/2005 c16 6summers-end
Wow. Really good story. It's written really well. It's really great.
Thanks for finally getting Ellie out of that situation. It was so sad.
This sounds so unimportant, but what happened to the purple dress that Dylan bought for Ellie? It has this great memory attached to it and I really, really hope it didn't end up in the trash or ripped or anything.
I hope you update soon!
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6summers-endWow. Really good story. It's written really well. It's really great.
Thanks for finally getting Ellie out of that situation. It was so sad.
This sounds so unimportant, but what happened to the purple dress that Dylan bought for Ellie? It has this great memory attached to it and I really, really hope it didn't end up in the trash or ripped or anything.
I hope you update soon!
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