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9/17/2005 c16 29hasseena
I have been reading all the chapters of this story in the last few days. The story is beautiful and I truly like it.I also liked the pictures of the characters.Hope you update soon.

- Nandini (your new reviewer)
9/17/2005 c16 58slowlydancingtothestars
I love ur story!
9/17/2005 c16 17Lady of romance world88
Hey! Oh my god. Donovan came rescue. How sweetly he cared for Ellie. Why does he wants to stay with her? What happened between Donovan and Ellie now? Why does Donovan don't care about her when they stepped into the high school now? Why now? Why does Donovan wants to be with Ellie? Is it because he really like her and miss her? Hurry update soon.
9/16/2005 c16 6DragonFaeLynn
If that isn't the sweetest thing I've ever heard...

Great job so far. I'm loving it... I think I've said that every review, but it's too true. Keep it up and please update soon! Take care~
9/16/2005 c15 DragonFaeLynn
Oh shit... T.T

Save her Donovan! Save her! Save her!
9/16/2005 c14 DragonFaeLynn
Oh damn... That's hot... Lol... *snickers*
9/16/2005 c13 DragonFaeLynn
LMAO! Damn, I think this is the best chapter yet! Keep it up girly!
9/16/2005 c9 DragonFaeLynn
Wedding night? Eh? That's pretty damned funny...
9/16/2005 c8 DragonFaeLynn
I'm loving this story. It's so... so... different? I don't know... I've been reading a lot of unique stories lately and this one falls under that category. Good job... I'm on to the next chappie now... Take care~
9/16/2005 c16 17Nocturnal silhouette
I LOVE this! Very excellent chapter. It's about time someone else knows about that idiot for a stepfather. Oh I love how this is coming together.
9/15/2005 c1 6DragonFaeLynn
Oh... It sounds intriguing... I'm all for it... *clicks next chapter... while cursing stupid computer... erm...*
9/15/2005 c16 6Pandemonium Express
YAY! Okay, so it all ended well. Happy days. Plus she gets out of gym class! hehe. ANyways, I'm first on your comment replies! -^_^- I feel special!

Yeah, I realize that's most probably because I either had the last or first comment on your previous story -most likely last- but I'm just going to keep on living in my own little oblivious happy world anyways. I need as many happy thoughts as possible what with school and all. =_=
9/14/2005 c16 sweetNsourMIX
Wow! This was really something. Don't worry if this wasn't as long as the last, cause of the contents in this chapter, it would have been a bit too much. Oh boy. This was hard...I felt so sorry for Ellie. But I'm happy that Donovan knows and i'm especially happy that he was her knight in shinning armor. That was the best thing that could ever happen to Ellie.

Well, i'm exhausted from school (as always) but i'm glad I caught your story! And here's my review! Well, you guys are doing very well! But this chapter made me realize that maybe this is almost the end of Ellie's and Donovan's story? I'm not sure but it kinda seems like it. So yup. I am extremely saddened by this new realization but I can't wait 'till the end. But just keep writing, you two. You guys, or shall I say girls, are doing a spectacular job. Take care! Bye!
9/14/2005 c1 19Blueskelton
Thanks so much for reading. In response to your review. Its a cyberpunk story (which of course is not obvious yet so dont feel bad). The God in the story is not necessarily the God of the Bible. Even though I do feel that way. Maybe you have had a life that is full of joy and you have good feelings about your life. But for me life is just one moment of suffering after another. Death is the reprieve. Hence I am forsaken (by God if he was the one who truly put me here) to walk on this Earth for a short time. But its actually a literary reference to Achilles of the Iliad so I guess the God could easily be zeus. Thanks for the Review I will try to return this weekend and read a little of your work. But I have to bs a paper due friday morning which leaves me little time. Take care until then.
9/14/2005 c16 xX cHeRn
Haha .. nice pen name.

I LIKE THIS CHAPTER. And I like this story .. lol. Thanks for updating, and KEEP WRITING.

Can't wait until the next chapter!

[Just out of curiosty. Where'd you guys get the idea to write this?]
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