for Our Midnight Playground9/14/2005 c16 
136LilLaTLuv
Hey!
I'm glad! IT'S ABOUT FREAKING TIME! But won't the whole school know by tomorrow? Oh, well. They'll get over it! GREAT CHAPPIE! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE?
Luv ya,Tashi :)
136LilLaTLuvHey!
I'm glad! IT'S ABOUT FREAKING TIME! But won't the whole school know by tomorrow? Oh, well. They'll get over it! GREAT CHAPPIE! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE?
Luv ya,Tashi :)
9/14/2005 c16 acira
at last he's stopped... i hope the story would take a lighter side as for now cause i think they've gone through a not easy time... *deep breath* i wana ask sumthing and pls answer,i need to know...wat wud u do if ur great celfone is confiscated by ur teacher and u wont be getting it back till the day after the day after tomorrow? pls. ans.. i need to know...im so depressed...
at last he's stopped... i hope the story would take a lighter side as for now cause i think they've gone through a not easy time... *deep breath* i wana ask sumthing and pls answer,i need to know...wat wud u do if ur great celfone is confiscated by ur teacher and u wont be getting it back till the day after the day after tomorrow? pls. ans.. i need to know...im so depressed...
9/14/2005 c16 4SitaTheLastVampire
Thank you for the moments I spent reading your story (I know it's not the end yet, but thanks anyway).The last chapie was nice...por fin, someone knows...Her mother kinda distrub me, coz, I mean when you know that something happen to your children you rush out to see if their ok, I mean I'm no mother but I have lost of nephews and cousins that I really care about and if one thing would happen to then, I know that I'll come running to see if their ok, work, or no work...
4SitaTheLastVampireThank you for the moments I spent reading your story (I know it's not the end yet, but thanks anyway).The last chapie was nice...por fin, someone knows...Her mother kinda distrub me, coz, I mean when you know that something happen to your children you rush out to see if their ok, I mean I'm no mother but I have lost of nephews and cousins that I really care about and if one thing would happen to then, I know that I'll come running to see if their ok, work, or no work...
9/13/2005 c16 exquisite extreme
wow, talk about intense. i'm glad donovan finally found out and confronted the whole situation. poor guy though. and ellie, too.
this was a good chapter.
i hope to see more ellie/donovan and dylan in the next one though! :) good job on this!
exquisite extreme
wow, talk about intense. i'm glad donovan finally found out and confronted the whole situation. poor guy though. and ellie, too.
this was a good chapter.
i hope to see more ellie/donovan and dylan in the next one though! :) good job on this!
exquisite extreme
9/13/2005 c16 3Red Orchid
S w e e t - I'm glad that someone else knows about the abuse. Such a cute ending too.
3Red OrchidS w e e t - I'm glad that someone else knows about the abuse. Such a cute ending too.
9/13/2005 c16 11Ashgyrl
Steve is such a $%#!* excuse the laungage. OMG Donovan is probaly one of the best guys in the whole wide world for that. I feel bad For Ellie cuz it sounds like shes riskin alot to be his friend. Last but not least is donovan gonna end up saving her life again and then marring her?
11AshgyrlSteve is such a $%#!* excuse the laungage. OMG Donovan is probaly one of the best guys in the whole wide world for that. I feel bad For Ellie cuz it sounds like shes riskin alot to be his friend. Last but not least is donovan gonna end up saving her life again and then marring her?
9/13/2005 c16 13Tenshistar
What does EMS stand for? i thought it was EMT...I don't know. Sorry, i just had to comment cause it looked wrong, but maybe you're thinking of another branch. Well, i loved the chapter. You're doing a really good job.
13TenshistarWhat does EMS stand for? i thought it was EMT...I don't know. Sorry, i just had to comment cause it looked wrong, but maybe you're thinking of another branch. Well, i loved the chapter. You're doing a really good job.
9/13/2005 c16 Rena
Thats what I am talking about.. having her scared.. just a little to commit to Donovan due to her past incounters with Steve, it just makes it REAL!.
Story is going great girls
Thats what I am talking about.. having her scared.. just a little to commit to Donovan due to her past incounters with Steve, it just makes it REAL!.
Story is going great girls
9/13/2005 c16 murfdurf22
aw donovans so sweet, he reminds me of my ex, Malik...*dreamy sigh*...ANYWAYS! lol. I loved this chapter, I can't wait for your next update, please make it soon!
aw donovans so sweet, he reminds me of my ex, Malik...*dreamy sigh*...ANYWAYS! lol. I loved this chapter, I can't wait for your next update, please make it soon!
9/13/2005 c16 1photogirl16
aww, that was cute, he didn't want to leave her! And now hopefully her mom will get rid of Steve! Well, good chapter, update soon!
1photogirl16aww, that was cute, he didn't want to leave her! And now hopefully her mom will get rid of Steve! Well, good chapter, update soon!
9/13/2005 c16 Blue Panther
Hahahaha! Sleeping on the couch! I know school can be a pain, but life is better! I have found in the last few weeks that college school life is so much better. It doesn't hurt that i only have five classes too. Keep up the good work! i am really enjoying it and i think that you two work together good. If you hadn't said i would have guessed there was only one author. Laters B.P.
Hahahaha! Sleeping on the couch! I know school can be a pain, but life is better! I have found in the last few weeks that college school life is so much better. It doesn't hurt that i only have five classes too. Keep up the good work! i am really enjoying it and i think that you two work together good. If you hadn't said i would have guessed there was only one author. Laters B.P.
9/11/2005 c15 6Pandemonium Express
oh, shoot. O_O Nonononononononono! you can't do this, it's evil! _ Ellie! ...but Donovan'll save her, right? ...right?
sorry about the lack of comments last time, but it's the start of school and whatnot...not much free time anymore. Evil teachers. I swear they're really just incredibly skilled and subtle torture artists. Ugh. =_=
6Pandemonium Expressoh, shoot. O_O Nonononononononono! you can't do this, it's evil! _ Ellie! ...but Donovan'll save her, right? ...right?
sorry about the lack of comments last time, but it's the start of school and whatnot...not much free time anymore. Evil teachers. I swear they're really just incredibly skilled and subtle torture artists. Ugh. =_=