for Our Midnight Playground9/10/2005 c15 Anne
I LOVE your story!Please make more parts soon!THANKS!
I LOVE your story!Please make more parts soon!THANKS!
9/10/2005 c15 Rena
I am really enjoying this story.. alot...
but..you kinda fell from where you were at the beginning of the story. Eliie portrayed a battered child.. head down, walking through the halls.. never REALLY look at anyone in the eyes, affraid of rejection and other mean things peers can do..
Um, with the Donovan/Dylan situation.. she should be scared. Due to her stepfather hitting her all the time.. being in that situation, would make you almost scared of guys.. even if donovan is her ex-bestfriend. It kinda just goes like that.. she knows not every man is like Steve... but she is scared she will get hurt (just like her mother)...It would make it more realistic if Ellie really wanted to be with donovan, but then had little spots of her mind that told her not to, due to how bad of a person a man can be...
I dunno.. just my opinion.Otherwise.. the story is Guh-RATE!-Rena-
I am really enjoying this story.. alot...
but..you kinda fell from where you were at the beginning of the story. Eliie portrayed a battered child.. head down, walking through the halls.. never REALLY look at anyone in the eyes, affraid of rejection and other mean things peers can do..
Um, with the Donovan/Dylan situation.. she should be scared. Due to her stepfather hitting her all the time.. being in that situation, would make you almost scared of guys.. even if donovan is her ex-bestfriend. It kinda just goes like that.. she knows not every man is like Steve... but she is scared she will get hurt (just like her mother)...It would make it more realistic if Ellie really wanted to be with donovan, but then had little spots of her mind that told her not to, due to how bad of a person a man can be...
I dunno.. just my opinion.Otherwise.. the story is Guh-RATE!-Rena-
9/10/2005 c15 
17Lady of romance world88
Hey! Wow! Donovan and Ellie were kissed. Why can't her mother divorce Steven? Poor Ellie. I wonder what will Donovan do? Will he going to gets Ella out of her house and protect her? How sweetly their date are. I can't wait for next chapter. Yes, Ellie needs him. What happened? There is screamed. Oh no, is Ellie is hurt? What will Donovan do? I wonder if they will be togethers in later on? Hurry update soon.
17Lady of romance world88Hey! Wow! Donovan and Ellie were kissed. Why can't her mother divorce Steven? Poor Ellie. I wonder what will Donovan do? Will he going to gets Ella out of her house and protect her? How sweetly their date are. I can't wait for next chapter. Yes, Ellie needs him. What happened? There is screamed. Oh no, is Ellie is hurt? What will Donovan do? I wonder if they will be togethers in later on? Hurry update soon.
9/9/2005 c15 theeighthhouse
oh and donovan comes into the picture? um...are there two of you people writing this?
oh and donovan comes into the picture? um...are there two of you people writing this?
9/9/2005 c15 murfdurf22
aw i loved it! it's so great, i love tis story to death, please update soon!
aw i loved it! it's so great, i love tis story to death, please update soon!
9/9/2005 c15 sweetNsourMIX
Hi you guys! I hope you remember me! But I'm truly sorry! The last chapter I reviewed was chapter 9. And I feel extremely bad that I haven't read and reviewed in such a Long time. I'm truly sorry. But I had no time to do it. And I was planning on going over and reviewing each and every chapter but I realized that its too many. So, I'm reviewing this one and i'm gonna add everything from what I wanted to say for the other chapters too! So, forgive me if this is too long. I'll try and make it simple and short.
Well, all the chapters that you had written before this was absolutely fabulous! I loved 'em very much! And this...I'm so happy! It's wayy too cute! It even makes me envy Ellie. Aww...I dont even know what to say, where to begin and end. Just...I'm in awe. This is the greatest chapter yet and you two had wrote it very well. I love it very much!
You guys are Cooler Rooney! I love your story! And well, I wanted to keep this simple so I will be going now. And hopefully I will keep in touch and not miss your stories and try to review 'em. But you guys are great and awesome! Keep wriiting please! Ok, Take care, take your time, and I'll try to read & review your next installment. Bye!
Hi you guys! I hope you remember me! But I'm truly sorry! The last chapter I reviewed was chapter 9. And I feel extremely bad that I haven't read and reviewed in such a Long time. I'm truly sorry. But I had no time to do it. And I was planning on going over and reviewing each and every chapter but I realized that its too many. So, I'm reviewing this one and i'm gonna add everything from what I wanted to say for the other chapters too! So, forgive me if this is too long. I'll try and make it simple and short.
Well, all the chapters that you had written before this was absolutely fabulous! I loved 'em very much! And this...I'm so happy! It's wayy too cute! It even makes me envy Ellie. Aww...I dont even know what to say, where to begin and end. Just...I'm in awe. This is the greatest chapter yet and you two had wrote it very well. I love it very much!
You guys are Cooler Rooney! I love your story! And well, I wanted to keep this simple so I will be going now. And hopefully I will keep in touch and not miss your stories and try to review 'em. But you guys are great and awesome! Keep wriiting please! Ok, Take care, take your time, and I'll try to read & review your next installment. Bye!
9/9/2005 c15 4untitled furniture
Aw poor ellie :( Prince charming Yay! I hope thats Donovan!...wow I have nothing really to say... shocking...hmm...yep...I'm bored...maybe I should press the send buttone...ok this was a waste of time, thanks to my weirdness...well Update soon!
4untitled furnitureAw poor ellie :( Prince charming Yay! I hope thats Donovan!...wow I have nothing really to say... shocking...hmm...yep...I'm bored...maybe I should press the send buttone...ok this was a waste of time, thanks to my weirdness...well Update soon!
9/9/2005 c15 136LilLaTLuv
Hey!
HE KNOWS! FINALLY! SAVE HER, DONOVAN! I LO-OVE Donovan! UPDATE SOON! YOU so deserved over one hundred reviews! Congrats, again! I hope he saves her good (that IS why it's called Prince Charming, RIGHT?) Seriously! UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! PLEASE?
Luv ya,Tashi :)
136LilLaTLuvHey!
HE KNOWS! FINALLY! SAVE HER, DONOVAN! I LO-OVE Donovan! UPDATE SOON! YOU so deserved over one hundred reviews! Congrats, again! I hope he saves her good (that IS why it's called Prince Charming, RIGHT?) Seriously! UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! PLEASE?
Luv ya,Tashi :)
9/9/2005 c15 Blue Panther
Thanks for the thanks. I got so excited seeing my name! I really like your story so far. The suspense on what Donavan will do in reaction is starting to eat at me. I am writing a story too (not on fictionpress so you cant read it) and the friends i have take a look always complain that i leave it at a cliff hanger. Keep it up!Blue Panther
Thanks for the thanks. I got so excited seeing my name! I really like your story so far. The suspense on what Donavan will do in reaction is starting to eat at me. I am writing a story too (not on fictionpress so you cant read it) and the friends i have take a look always complain that i leave it at a cliff hanger. Keep it up!Blue Panther
9/9/2005 c15 Sabby
Hehe! This chapter was really well written - you guys rock! I like the date scene, it's really funny ^^ what's gonna happen to Ellie now? @o@ hope she's okay! Anyway, hope you guys update soon! ^_^
-Sabby-xoxox-
Hehe! This chapter was really well written - you guys rock! I like the date scene, it's really funny ^^ what's gonna happen to Ellie now? @o@ hope she's okay! Anyway, hope you guys update soon! ^_^
-Sabby-xoxox-
9/8/2005 c15 3Chixon
This chapter was really good. And I'm so excited about the next one! I'd tell you to hurry, but I don't want you to rush through it. So, just take your time. I can handle suffering for a few days.
(was that convincing? because I still haven't convinced myself)
3ChixonThis chapter was really good. And I'm so excited about the next one! I'd tell you to hurry, but I don't want you to rush through it. So, just take your time. I can handle suffering for a few days.
(was that convincing? because I still haven't convinced myself)
9/8/2005 c15 13Tenshistar
That was a cute chapter. I love bowling, but the owner was never that mean. I guess. I loved the chapter and can't wait til the next one.
13TenshistarThat was a cute chapter. I love bowling, but the owner was never that mean. I guess. I loved the chapter and can't wait til the next one.
9/8/2005 c15 4theysayitscrazy
Oh my god! It happened! It finally happened. Now Donovan better get his ass into that house and save the day. He better take her home with him and take care of her. She can't live there anymore. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! YOU HAVE TO! RIGHT NOW!
4theysayitscrazyOh my god! It happened! It finally happened. Now Donovan better get his ass into that house and save the day. He better take her home with him and take care of her. She can't live there anymore. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! YOU HAVE TO! RIGHT NOW!