for Our Midnight Playground9/8/2005 c15 
4Karuli
yay! someone finally might find out and ellie wont be abused anymore! i think. anyways, great chap.
4Karuliyay! someone finally might find out and ellie wont be abused anymore! i think. anyways, great chap.
9/8/2005 c15 4FairyOfDeath
HAHAHA i love you...you make me laugh so hard, my family think im crazy for all the rendom noises im making lol, AWSOME JOB
4FairyOfDeathHAHAHA i love you...you make me laugh so hard, my family think im crazy for all the rendom noises im making lol, AWSOME JOB
9/8/2005 c15 exquisite extreme
wow, i was so excited that you updated so fast! yay! :)
this was a good chapter-definitely long! and i loved that. poor dylan though! i'm actually feeling really bad for him...
but anyway, it seems like donovan's finally found out something unusual about ellie's life. i can't wait until he actually finds out WHAT it is... because i wonder how he'd react to that.
and i also wonder how things are going to go between the two of them at school tomorrow. and how she and dylan interact too. i hope he's not mad at her!
anyway, update soon!
exquisite extreme
wow, i was so excited that you updated so fast! yay! :)
this was a good chapter-definitely long! and i loved that. poor dylan though! i'm actually feeling really bad for him...
but anyway, it seems like donovan's finally found out something unusual about ellie's life. i can't wait until he actually finds out WHAT it is... because i wonder how he'd react to that.
and i also wonder how things are going to go between the two of them at school tomorrow. and how she and dylan interact too. i hope he's not mad at her!
anyway, update soon!
exquisite extreme
9/8/2005 c15 7Maibe Josie
Thought I'd let you know I was still reading. I also wanted to mention how much I thought that last line sent me chills.
7Maibe JosieThought I'd let you know I was still reading. I also wanted to mention how much I thought that last line sent me chills.
9/8/2005 c15 1photogirl16
omg! you have to update soon! (by the way i switched my name from Moviechicka to beckylouwhoo16) YOu HAVE to update really soon though b/c you so just left us there! ah! i hope donovan goes in and saves her or something. good chapter, it was cute!
1photogirl16omg! you have to update soon! (by the way i switched my name from Moviechicka to beckylouwhoo16) YOu HAVE to update really soon though b/c you so just left us there! ah! i hope donovan goes in and saves her or something. good chapter, it was cute!
9/8/2005 c15 10Hell's first Icicle
hey! finally some1s gonna find out about her stepfather! oh and my fav line - Guys. Can’t live with them and it’s illegal to shoot them. yay! =D
10Hell's first Iciclehey! finally some1s gonna find out about her stepfather! oh and my fav line - Guys. Can’t live with them and it’s illegal to shoot them. yay! =D
9/8/2005 c14 WildGoddess
The kiss was perfect! Except next time you should add more heat...I like mush.
The kiss was perfect! Except next time you should add more heat...I like mush.
9/8/2005 c13 3Mrs. MJackson
crap, i forgot to put it on author and favorite stories list, sorry, love the story! lol
3Mrs. MJacksoncrap, i forgot to put it on author and favorite stories list, sorry, love the story! lol
9/8/2005 c14 Mrs. MJackson
i love this story so much, i just had to put it on my favorite stories list and author alert, update ASAP
i love this story so much, i just had to put it on my favorite stories list and author alert, update ASAP
9/7/2005 c14 murfdurf22
*SMILES(* aw i love it, i love this story, so glad that i found it, i really like donovan, and he kissed her! aww he's so sweet, i can't wait for their date, update soon!
*SMILES(* aw i love it, i love this story, so glad that i found it, i really like donovan, and he kissed her! aww he's so sweet, i can't wait for their date, update soon!
9/7/2005 c14 Nessa03
Awe, Excellent, the kiss.. was perfect. Great timeing too... Now to Spice it up ... lol! Keep writing.! love this story!
Awe, Excellent, the kiss.. was perfect. Great timeing too... Now to Spice it up ... lol! Keep writing.! love this story!
9/7/2005 c14 Blue Panther
Really great so far. I am anticipating what will happen that night. When will Ellie have her release for freedom from Stinky Steve? I get the impression she doesn't 'like' Dylan. If that is what is supposed to happen, great! I like that she is a one guy only type of gal.
Really great so far. I am anticipating what will happen that night. When will Ellie have her release for freedom from Stinky Steve? I get the impression she doesn't 'like' Dylan. If that is what is supposed to happen, great! I like that she is a one guy only type of gal.
9/7/2005 c14 4theysayitscrazy
I can't believe that just happened. In the middle of class? Damn. What'll people say? And blackmailed into a date? That kinda sucks. But when he comes to pick her up...is that when the whole show down with the step dad happens? update asap! come on! I love it. :)
4theysayitscrazyI can't believe that just happened. In the middle of class? Damn. What'll people say? And blackmailed into a date? That kinda sucks. But when he comes to pick her up...is that when the whole show down with the step dad happens? update asap! come on! I love it. :)