for Our Midnight Playground8/21/2005 c11 
1photogirl16
Poor Ellie, she has such a crappy home life. I kinda want Donovan to find out and like help her and protect her, cause that would be cute. Anyways, good chapter, update soon.
1photogirl16Poor Ellie, she has such a crappy home life. I kinda want Donovan to find out and like help her and protect her, cause that would be cute. Anyways, good chapter, update soon.
8/21/2005 c11 7BangBangYourDead
Lol Someone needs to find out about steve soon.. what an abusive jerk! Lol Nice update!♥
7BangBangYourDeadLol Someone needs to find out about steve soon.. what an abusive jerk! Lol Nice update!♥
8/21/2005 c11 exquisite extreme
LOVED this chapter!
LOVED this chapter!
8/21/2005 c11 Leaving Fictionpress
lol...you have very original characters. Ellie is hilarious, Donovan is adorable, and I love his name. Ellie is definitely not too sarcastic. I like that you always preview the title of the next chapter; I don't know why, I just do. It's probably because I never think that far ahead about chapter titles...anyway, nice job, yadda yadda yadda, update soon!
lol...you have very original characters. Ellie is hilarious, Donovan is adorable, and I love his name. Ellie is definitely not too sarcastic. I like that you always preview the title of the next chapter; I don't know why, I just do. It's probably because I never think that far ahead about chapter titles...anyway, nice job, yadda yadda yadda, update soon!
8/21/2005 c11 17Nocturnal silhouette
Are you kidding? I love the fact she's so sarcastic. Makes her more interesting. Keep up the good work.
17Nocturnal silhouetteAre you kidding? I love the fact she's so sarcastic. Makes her more interesting. Keep up the good work.
8/20/2005 c11 4theysayitscrazy
oh my god! Donovan had to have seen! what the hell! And then he just drove off? I'll kill him. I'm really bad at the whole reviewing every chapter thing. I'm starting to think that you guys update more than one chapter at once. I think thats it. :) LOL great job. I can't wait to read more. Update soon.
4theysayitscrazyoh my god! Donovan had to have seen! what the hell! And then he just drove off? I'll kill him. I'm really bad at the whole reviewing every chapter thing. I'm starting to think that you guys update more than one chapter at once. I think thats it. :) LOL great job. I can't wait to read more. Update soon.
8/20/2005 c11 2happilynuts
yes!*punches fist in air* Donovan is cote! and ellie is adorable! *gives them both a hug* *looks around and seez Steve..."AH! WEIRD WEIRDO ALERT!" karate-kicks Steve, who falls down dead* all hail mighty Dee the rescuer of cool people! *grins* update soon!luvDee
2happilynutsyes!*punches fist in air* Donovan is cote! and ellie is adorable! *gives them both a hug* *looks around and seez Steve..."AH! WEIRD WEIRDO ALERT!" karate-kicks Steve, who falls down dead* all hail mighty Dee the rescuer of cool people! *grins* update soon!luvDee
8/20/2005 c11 Sabrina300
For someone who's abused, yes, I think Ellie is way too sarcastic. But, because I love this story so darn much, I try to overlook it. Keep the awesome updates comin'
For someone who's abused, yes, I think Ellie is way too sarcastic. But, because I love this story so darn much, I try to overlook it. Keep the awesome updates comin'
8/20/2005 c10 2happilynuts
is sum1 going 2 find out about steve soon?it seem like it was so close in this chapter...i don't like steve...*sniffz* or her mum...*growlz* update soon!luvyour faithful reviewrDee
2happilynutsis sum1 going 2 find out about steve soon?it seem like it was so close in this chapter...i don't like steve...*sniffz* or her mum...*growlz* update soon!luvyour faithful reviewrDee
8/20/2005 c9 sweetNsourMIX
Aww how adorably cute! I loved the ending! Gawd! Donovan is SO hot like that! Lol. Donovan's protectiveness makes him seem so sexy. Haha. Sorry I had to say it! But this ending was soo cute! But then...does that mean Donovan is admitting his feelings...hm? Rioght! We'll see, or I'll see. I love you guys! You and your sister are doing one hell of a job! I'm loving it! I really really am! Keep writing! It makes me happy! =D
Aww how adorably cute! I loved the ending! Gawd! Donovan is SO hot like that! Lol. Donovan's protectiveness makes him seem so sexy. Haha. Sorry I had to say it! But this ending was soo cute! But then...does that mean Donovan is admitting his feelings...hm? Rioght! We'll see, or I'll see. I love you guys! You and your sister are doing one hell of a job! I'm loving it! I really really am! Keep writing! It makes me happy! =D
8/19/2005 c9 acira
wow! that was a very cute chpter's ending, shocking really but i find it cute... hehe...wow!=D
wow! that was a very cute chpter's ending, shocking really but i find it cute... hehe...wow!=D
8/19/2005 c9 6Pandemonium Express
Haha, I don't know if Ellie's keeping track anymore, but that last bit was definitely one point for Donovan. :P
I love your story and can't wait for an update (hint, hint)
6Pandemonium ExpressHaha, I don't know if Ellie's keeping track anymore, but that last bit was definitely one point for Donovan. :P
I love your story and can't wait for an update (hint, hint)