for Our Midnight Playground8/19/2005 c9 punkgirl123
AW! THAT WAS TOO CUTE! update soon!
AW! THAT WAS TOO CUTE! update soon!
8/19/2005 c9 
2cbprice25
I think you must have meant "carrying" instead of "catching". I like the ending. Update soon!
2cbprice25I think you must have meant "carrying" instead of "catching". I like the ending. Update soon!
8/19/2005 c9 conditionoakland
Hilarious! I loved the ending of this chapter!I kept cracking up all through out the story. My family even gave me a werid look when i let out a huge giggle at the "stalker!" part. haha. I love this story, I really do! keep it up!
Hilarious! I loved the ending of this chapter!I kept cracking up all through out the story. My family even gave me a werid look when i let out a huge giggle at the "stalker!" part. haha. I love this story, I really do! keep it up!
8/19/2005 c5 4untitled furniture
I know i reviewd twice but i love the picture! Wow steven looks scary but Donavan looks hot and Ellie looks pretty.
4untitled furnitureI know i reviewd twice but i love the picture! Wow steven looks scary but Donavan looks hot and Ellie looks pretty.
8/19/2005 c9 untitled furniture
Lol you didnt take long i think i started to read yesterday or wasi ti the day before... hm... O well i loved the chapeter and I hope she ok i never fainted before either. But i always wanted to... I know thats just Weird.
Lol you didnt take long i think i started to read yesterday or wasi ti the day before... hm... O well i loved the chapeter and I hope she ok i never fainted before either. But i always wanted to... I know thats just Weird.
8/19/2005 c4 Karuli
Poor Ellie. Why doesn't she call the police or tell her mother? I always feel depressed reading stories like these because the abused child never says a word and it's not just in stories either. Anyways, hope you update soon.
Poor Ellie. Why doesn't she call the police or tell her mother? I always feel depressed reading stories like these because the abused child never says a word and it's not just in stories either. Anyways, hope you update soon.
8/19/2005 c2 Karuli
lol, but how could Donovon get from outside to in class faster than Ellie without her noticing? unless she didn't notice...did she? hope you update soon.
lol, but how could Donovon get from outside to in class faster than Ellie without her noticing? unless she didn't notice...did she? hope you update soon.
8/19/2005 c9 2happilynuts
dononvan is so cute! yepyep! *nods head wisely* hm, and ellie is cute 2! *grins happily* i luv ur story heaps! update soon!luvDee
2happilynutsdononvan is so cute! yepyep! *nods head wisely* hm, and ellie is cute 2! *grins happily* i luv ur story heaps! update soon!luvDee
8/18/2005 c9 exquisite extreme
Aw, the ending was INCREDIBLY sweet! I hadn't been expecting that kind of answer from him at all, but for some reason, it didn't seem weird that he would say such a thing. It was so very cute. :)
Anyway, I saw the character pictures; Dylan is adorable. I love his smile. He actually kind of does look like the Dylan I envisioned before I saw the picture. Donovan and Ellie were nothing at all like I thought... but that's okay. They still make a cute couple.
Great chapter. :) Update soon!
~exquisite extreme
Aw, the ending was INCREDIBLY sweet! I hadn't been expecting that kind of answer from him at all, but for some reason, it didn't seem weird that he would say such a thing. It was so very cute. :)
Anyway, I saw the character pictures; Dylan is adorable. I love his smile. He actually kind of does look like the Dylan I envisioned before I saw the picture. Donovan and Ellie were nothing at all like I thought... but that's okay. They still make a cute couple.
Great chapter. :) Update soon!
~exquisite extreme
8/16/2005 c8 happilynuts
wow! this storyh is so cool! do we learn later on more about donovan?...he seems intersting:D newayz...just wanted 2 say ur story was awesome! i'll b waiting 4 da nxt chap! luvDee
wow! this storyh is so cool! do we learn later on more about donovan?...he seems intersting:D newayz...just wanted 2 say ur story was awesome! i'll b waiting 4 da nxt chap! luvDee