for Our Midnight Playground8/16/2005 c8 exquisite extreme
So Dylan... he's a little protective, isn't he? ;) Hahah.
So Dylan... he's a little protective, isn't he? ;) Hahah.
8/16/2005 c8 sweetNsourMIX
O! Competition ehh? Rawr! Haha jk! But really, if Dylan and Donovan fight, i'd have to say, I'd go with Donovan. Dylan seems too nice plus Donovan had save Ellie from the drunk guy soo...yup! This chater is great, I liked it. Or maybe I liked it how Dylan was protective and then Ellie and Donovan are friends again. I dunno but it was great!Taste-of-tears? Aww who's gonna make who (or Ellie) cry? I'll wait! And you guys keep writing! Please?
O! Competition ehh? Rawr! Haha jk! But really, if Dylan and Donovan fight, i'd have to say, I'd go with Donovan. Dylan seems too nice plus Donovan had save Ellie from the drunk guy soo...yup! This chater is great, I liked it. Or maybe I liked it how Dylan was protective and then Ellie and Donovan are friends again. I dunno but it was great!Taste-of-tears? Aww who's gonna make who (or Ellie) cry? I'll wait! And you guys keep writing! Please?
8/16/2005 c8 
4theysayitscrazy
Great chapter as always. I think it's cool that you two write together. So a friendship between Donovan and Ellie...I can only imagine what's gonna come from that. I hope nothing too bad happens to Ellie later on. And I hope that the gorgeous dress Dlyan bought isn't ruined by Steve. That would suck and be a waste of Dylan's money. Well, keep up the great work and update soon.
4theysayitscrazyGreat chapter as always. I think it's cool that you two write together. So a friendship between Donovan and Ellie...I can only imagine what's gonna come from that. I hope nothing too bad happens to Ellie later on. And I hope that the gorgeous dress Dlyan bought isn't ruined by Steve. That would suck and be a waste of Dylan's money. Well, keep up the great work and update soon.
8/16/2005 c8 1photogirl16
I love your story! it's so cute and it's really good! I'm so glad Donovan and Ellie are friends again. Update soon!
1photogirl16I love your story! it's so cute and it's really good! I'm so glad Donovan and Ellie are friends again. Update soon!
8/16/2005 c8 Dark Avenger
I like your story, it's gr8 so far.
Why doesn't Ellie's mother wake up and smell the roses! Looks at what's happening to her daughter for cryin' out loud! I don't see why Ellie should want her mother to have her own *fairy tale* marriage, when the guy's abusive. Why would she want her mother with a man like that?
Is she going to get her dress back?
The pictures were awesome. Donovan's really... muscluar...yep, they all suit their characters!
(I awoke with a start, glancing to the clock 11:15 PM.) Isn't it meant to be A.M. or is it just me who can't figure out A.M. from P.M.?
Anyway, love it so update soon!:)
I like your story, it's gr8 so far.
Why doesn't Ellie's mother wake up and smell the roses! Looks at what's happening to her daughter for cryin' out loud! I don't see why Ellie should want her mother to have her own *fairy tale* marriage, when the guy's abusive. Why would she want her mother with a man like that?
Is she going to get her dress back?
The pictures were awesome. Donovan's really... muscluar...yep, they all suit their characters!
(I awoke with a start, glancing to the clock 11:15 PM.) Isn't it meant to be A.M. or is it just me who can't figure out A.M. from P.M.?
Anyway, love it so update soon!:)
8/15/2005 c7 4theysayitscrazy
oh my god. This story was updated so fast that I competely missed the review for chapter 6. I'm bad. But you're good, awesome even. :) Awe...I loved the ice cream thing. "You want my cone?" So is she gonna accept or what? What about Dylan? What's he gonna say? And holy shit! He bought her the dress. Is he rich or something? I want a guy like that. Awesome chapter. Update soon. I can't wait for more.
4theysayitscrazyoh my god. This story was updated so fast that I competely missed the review for chapter 6. I'm bad. But you're good, awesome even. :) Awe...I loved the ice cream thing. "You want my cone?" So is she gonna accept or what? What about Dylan? What's he gonna say? And holy shit! He bought her the dress. Is he rich or something? I want a guy like that. Awesome chapter. Update soon. I can't wait for more.
8/15/2005 c7 exquisite extreme
Aw, how sweet! He offered her his cone. That's too cute. :)
Dylan is sweet, too... but he's not Donovan!
Aw, how sweet! He offered her his cone. That's too cute. :)
Dylan is sweet, too... but he's not Donovan!
8/15/2005 c7 sweetNsourMIX
Aw! That is so cute! Donovan makes me wanna hug him 'till his eyes pop out! Sorry, but he's that cute! And Dylan sounds cute too...I'm not even sure who to pick. But this is the cutest cliffie...well, its not really but I wanna know more! So it counts as one. But wow...Donovan is a bit fiesty. I wonder how he'll respond to Steve.
You guys are doing wonderful! I love your story! Keep it up! I'm pretty sure one will be up tomorrow...so i'll be checking you guys up by tomorrow!
Aw! That is so cute! Donovan makes me wanna hug him 'till his eyes pop out! Sorry, but he's that cute! And Dylan sounds cute too...I'm not even sure who to pick. But this is the cutest cliffie...well, its not really but I wanna know more! So it counts as one. But wow...Donovan is a bit fiesty. I wonder how he'll respond to Steve.
You guys are doing wonderful! I love your story! Keep it up! I'm pretty sure one will be up tomorrow...so i'll be checking you guys up by tomorrow!
8/15/2005 c1 lildevil609609
Great story, I'm excited to see chapter 7 with Ellie and Dylan on a date... It's a great story and I don't even read romances so it shows how great it is.
Great story, I'm excited to see chapter 7 with Ellie and Dylan on a date... It's a great story and I don't even read romances so it shows how great it is.
8/15/2005 c6 acira
Nice! i want to see more of Donovan and Ellie... i wanna know what will happen on Saturday...cant wait...
Nice! i want to see more of Donovan and Ellie... i wanna know what will happen on Saturday...cant wait...