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8/12/2005 c4 4theysayitscrazy
Wow. I hate her step-father. I hope Donovan comes to the rescue. :) One can dream right? Great chapter and update soon. I can't wait to read more.
8/12/2005 c4 acira
i really like this, totally... i just wish you'd make longer chapters..=)
8/12/2005 c3 theysayitscrazy
I really like this so far. Donovan sounds interesting. I can't wait to see how this turns out.

Also, just to let you know...the links to the photos aren't working...I don't know if it's just my computer being stupid, or something else, but they weren't working.

Great start so far and update soon. I can't wait to read more.
8/12/2005 c3 acira
oohh, this is nice...childhood sweeties...=) interesting...
8/12/2005 c3 Amanda
Great story! The only thing kinda weird was the fact that you made Ellie out to be friendless with only casual acquaintances, but then Maria shows up in chapter three as her best friend. Anyway, other than that I absolutely adore this story! Ellie is just too cute.
8/12/2005 c3 exquisite extreme
Aw, SWEET! I'm definitely loving your story so far, so please update soon! Although one thing does bug me, and it's the fact that I think you're moving too fast with some of the events... it just seems as if you're rushing things a bit.

Please don't take any offense to what I just said, because I really am loving your story so far. Hell, it's better than a lot of the stories here on fictionpress. But all I'm saying is that maybe you should slow things down a bit because I'd hate to see this type of story end quickly and abruptly.

Your writing though is really good, so kudos to you for that!

Well, that's my two cents. I hope you don't hate me too much. :) Because really, I think your story has great potential to become bigger.

Update soon!

~exquisite extreme
8/12/2005 c3 7Maibe Josie
You deserve more reviews than this... You have a simple style, but somehow this story seems familiar, like I've heard it before. And I'm sure I have...I'm only hoping you create a twist. And I was half expecting Donovan to to be nice so soon...
8/11/2005 c2 sweetNsourMIX
Hehehe! I like this chapter a lot! Hmm I wonder whats going to happen at the party? I have a feeling it's something good! I have to say, i'm enjoying your story so far! Take care and keep writing. I will be waiting!
8/11/2005 c1 sweetNsourMIX
Hello! Just found your story today! I think this story is great already. You got my attention! So I say keep writing.
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