for Our Midnight Playground10/11/2005 c1 safflowerdust
well youre a good writer but the characters arent rounded at all... theyre all flat which disappointed me
well youre a good writer but the characters arent rounded at all... theyre all flat which disappointed me
10/11/2005 c21 Rena
"time passed by"
"A memory unfolded"
"swept off her feet"
I also like the title u have now :)
"time passed by"
"A memory unfolded"
"swept off her feet"
I also like the title u have now :)
10/11/2005 c21 
13Tenshistar
i loved the epilogue! I can't wait for the new story. it sounds very interesting. Awesome job! Can't wait to see what comes next!
13Tenshistari loved the epilogue! I can't wait for the new story. it sounds very interesting. Awesome job! Can't wait to see what comes next!
10/11/2005 c21 Sabby
OMG! It's over! ^O^ And I can't wait for the new story too :D I think maybe in Scarlett's story, there could be the wedding of Ellie and Donovan? That would be so sweet! Hehe!
Hope you post the new story soon ^_^
-Sabby-xoxox-
OMG! It's over! ^O^ And I can't wait for the new story too :D I think maybe in Scarlett's story, there could be the wedding of Ellie and Donovan? That would be so sweet! Hehe!
Hope you post the new story soon ^_^
-Sabby-xoxox-
10/11/2005 c21 Navaura
As a writer myself, I have a suggestion, it's called, KEEP IT THE WAY IT IS!
I Also think you should do a follow up on Donovan and Ellie, and put grandma in it!Chew on it for a while,Navaura~Nubian Queen\SMILE!
As a writer myself, I have a suggestion, it's called, KEEP IT THE WAY IT IS!
I Also think you should do a follow up on Donovan and Ellie, and put grandma in it!Chew on it for a while,Navaura~Nubian Queen\SMILE!
10/11/2005 c20 Navaura
Aw!, that was the sweetest ending ever, I thought it should have been extended at first, but once you narrow it down when they're in the park, it all makes a nicely wrapped package!AW!Navaura~Nubian QueenI am now an avid fan of yours, devoted till the end!
Aw!, that was the sweetest ending ever, I thought it should have been extended at first, but once you narrow it down when they're in the park, it all makes a nicely wrapped package!AW!Navaura~Nubian QueenI am now an avid fan of yours, devoted till the end!
10/11/2005 c20 1Electroqute
O.O*gasp*THE...END!
wow...that came soner than I expected
i adored this story :D
~Katy
1ElectroquteO.O*gasp*THE...END!
wow...that came soner than I expected
i adored this story :D
~Katy
10/11/2005 c20 acira
i am mad, i missed chapter nineteen and i did not get to read and review that chapter...argh! nweiz, the story ended... i hope ul be writing a new one, nicer than this...=)
i am mad, i missed chapter nineteen and i did not get to read and review that chapter...argh! nweiz, the story ended... i hope ul be writing a new one, nicer than this...=)
10/11/2005 c20 29hasseena
I can't believe the story is over! wasn't expecting that at all. But the ending was good. Very sweet. I really want an epilogue please...maybe of wedding or post wedding. And it would be good to see the status of our other characters as well.I hope you write that and its hard to wait!Lastly, Awesome story. I am glad I started to read it.
29hasseenaI can't believe the story is over! wasn't expecting that at all. But the ending was good. Very sweet. I really want an epilogue please...maybe of wedding or post wedding. And it would be good to see the status of our other characters as well.I hope you write that and its hard to wait!Lastly, Awesome story. I am glad I started to read it.
10/11/2005 c20 Emilea
AWW. how cute! i love this story forever! maybe a SEQUEL would be good? =DD yeah? yeah? plz!
babe anjwl.x
AWW. how cute! i love this story forever! maybe a SEQUEL would be good? =DD yeah? yeah? plz!
babe anjwl.x