for Our Midnight Playground10/10/2005 c20 sweetNsourMIX
Wow! Best story! But how sad, its over. Its done. Its gone. Pooie! Yes, yes! Please write an epilogue! That'll be great! Great writers! I love you guys! Wonderful story! Yeah, im procrastinating on homework so I have to make this quick. I'm sorry. But goodluck on your other stories you gals are brewing in your minds. And definately, i'll stick around.Take care! Buh Bye!
Wow! Best story! But how sad, its over. Its done. Its gone. Pooie! Yes, yes! Please write an epilogue! That'll be great! Great writers! I love you guys! Wonderful story! Yeah, im procrastinating on homework so I have to make this quick. I'm sorry. But goodluck on your other stories you gals are brewing in your minds. And definately, i'll stick around.Take care! Buh Bye!
10/10/2005 c20 exquisite extreme
wow... you know what's crazy?
I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER! wow, 20 CHAPTERS! i swear to you, it doesn't even seem like it's that long! i lost track of the number of chapters long ago (didn't really notice it after the first few because i just wanted to get to the story)...
that's crazy. 20 chapters? is it really that long? wow...
maybe it just seems short to me because i didn't expect the abrupt ending (or because you finished it in such a short time!). i seriously thought you were joking when you wrote the "the end" at the end. i couldn't believe it! and i still can't.
but aside from that, this was really a sweet story. although more unrealistic than realistic (because let's face it, no guy is like donovan), it was still a good story. i'm just sad to see it end... :(
but that's okay. i'm happy with the ending. :)
great job on it all!
exquisite extreme
wow... you know what's crazy?
I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER! wow, 20 CHAPTERS! i swear to you, it doesn't even seem like it's that long! i lost track of the number of chapters long ago (didn't really notice it after the first few because i just wanted to get to the story)...
that's crazy. 20 chapters? is it really that long? wow...
maybe it just seems short to me because i didn't expect the abrupt ending (or because you finished it in such a short time!). i seriously thought you were joking when you wrote the "the end" at the end. i couldn't believe it! and i still can't.
but aside from that, this was really a sweet story. although more unrealistic than realistic (because let's face it, no guy is like donovan), it was still a good story. i'm just sad to see it end... :(
but that's okay. i'm happy with the ending. :)
great job on it all!
exquisite extreme
10/10/2005 c20 
2rosiedreamer
yep it did
NO IT CAN'T END!
this is ellie and donovan story... NO
i'll go read your other stories (if you have any)
2rosiedreameryep it did
NO IT CAN'T END!
this is ellie and donovan story... NO
i'll go read your other stories (if you have any)
10/10/2005 c20 13Tenshistar
I love it! The force is awesome, but you knew that. I don't have any questions really, but...could you still write an epilogue? I love seeing what the characters are doing in the future. Thanks and congrats on finishing! I think i'll put this on my fav lists.
13TenshistarI love it! The force is awesome, but you knew that. I don't have any questions really, but...could you still write an epilogue? I love seeing what the characters are doing in the future. Thanks and congrats on finishing! I think i'll put this on my fav lists.
10/10/2005 c20 3SweetKissOfChaos
Aww.. i'm sad to see it end but it was time. Good ending. I'd love for you to write a epilogue!
Well I can't wait to see your new story! So hurry up!
3SweetKissOfChaosAww.. i'm sad to see it end but it was time. Good ending. I'd love for you to write a epilogue!
Well I can't wait to see your new story! So hurry up!
10/10/2005 c20 5Dirty White Belt
OH MY BOB!I LOVED your story!I hope you work on more stories in the future!That was great!Please make more great stories soon!
5Dirty White BeltOH MY BOB!I LOVED your story!I hope you work on more stories in the future!That was great!Please make more great stories soon!
10/10/2005 c20 whrfanhotmail.com
I'm lost for words. What can I say? It was perfect and beautiful-all 20 chapters. You got me hooked and I will be waiting anxiously for your next story. Thank you for the entertainment.
I'm lost for words. What can I say? It was perfect and beautiful-all 20 chapters. You got me hooked and I will be waiting anxiously for your next story. Thank you for the entertainment.
10/10/2005 c20 murfdurf22
no i'ts over! darn it darn it darn it, that sucks, loved the ending, but it sucks that its over, i hope you come out with a new story, please do...oh no, i can't end my review with update soon, *tear*
no i'ts over! darn it darn it darn it, that sucks, loved the ending, but it sucks that its over, i hope you come out with a new story, please do...oh no, i can't end my review with update soon, *tear*
10/10/2005 c20 Lady Seiryu
OUI MON CAPITAN! *saluts*I loved it! So I'm defenetaly staying tuned! PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES! :3
OUI MON CAPITAN! *saluts*I loved it! So I'm defenetaly staying tuned! PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES! :3
10/9/2005 c19 silvrraindrop
yay! kill nikki, evil woman that she is!is brad going to be more important? and how's dylan going to react to this?
yay! kill nikki, evil woman that she is!is brad going to be more important? and how's dylan going to react to this?
10/8/2005 c19 25elohimdancer319
great story. Finally, someone got the loser stepdad. looking forward to the next chapter. i'm rooting for donovan!
KB
25elohimdancer319great story. Finally, someone got the loser stepdad. looking forward to the next chapter. i'm rooting for donovan!
KB
10/7/2005 c19 17Lady of romance world88
Does Ellie hit Nikki? Oh my god. Does Donovan cared about Ellie? How interesting that Dylan like Ellie more than friends, right? The dance is so good here with a catfight between Nikki and Ellie.Hurry update soon.
17Lady of romance world88Does Ellie hit Nikki? Oh my god. Does Donovan cared about Ellie? How interesting that Dylan like Ellie more than friends, right? The dance is so good here with a catfight between Nikki and Ellie.Hurry update soon.