for Release Your Grasp3/4/2006 c1 thenewromantic
Wow. I'm in a similiar situation with my parents and this... this just blows me away with how accurate it is. You've managed to express these emotions so clearly, yet still keep it lyrical with beautiful language. Sorry, you can't improve on this ^^ One of the best things I've ever read
Wow. I'm in a similiar situation with my parents and this... this just blows me away with how accurate it is. You've managed to express these emotions so clearly, yet still keep it lyrical with beautiful language. Sorry, you can't improve on this ^^ One of the best things I've ever read
9/4/2005 c1 
79Sorrowful Dreams
once again very well written. you have such a talent for your work. This one reached out and is very touching. great work!
~Sorrow~
79Sorrowful Dreamsonce again very well written. you have such a talent for your work. This one reached out and is very touching. great work!
~Sorrow~
8/12/2005 c1 3Audwin
Please note, I am not reviewing this just because it is requested, but because I wanted too, since the 1st stanza of the poem.
This poem creates a powerful atmosphere and it also brought back my strong feelings for power. To make a personal reference, the poem reminded me a great deal of the relationship I had with one of my friends and what it took to be liberated from his/ her grasp. In addition, it reminded me of my parents as well, although it wasn’t as powerful.
The poem itself was written so that the use of repetition was not abused – for I read several poems that did just the opposite. In addition, what I especially liked was that the words were not TOO limited in terms of complexity. Great job.
3AudwinPlease note, I am not reviewing this just because it is requested, but because I wanted too, since the 1st stanza of the poem.
This poem creates a powerful atmosphere and it also brought back my strong feelings for power. To make a personal reference, the poem reminded me a great deal of the relationship I had with one of my friends and what it took to be liberated from his/ her grasp. In addition, it reminded me of my parents as well, although it wasn’t as powerful.
The poem itself was written so that the use of repetition was not abused – for I read several poems that did just the opposite. In addition, what I especially liked was that the words were not TOO limited in terms of complexity. Great job.