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8/24/2005 c1 24Moonjava
Interesting. It made me think of like waking up some where and not really knowing where you are.
8/18/2005 c1 11Cloud Burst
interesting idea, and very original at that. i like the drama too, very tantalizing. keep up the awesome work!
8/14/2005 c1 1a moth in lace
Oh, this was pretty good. I like it a lot. It's very... conversational (idk if that's a word), like you're speaking it. It's kind of fluid and at ease and it makes sense, but it doesn't, and I think that's a great way to write. (Kind of like word salad.) Anyway, great job, I enjoyed this. :)

-marie
8/13/2005 c1 2having reached closure
Hm that was... tempting. haha. i really like that, adore it actually... very different and intriguing. Hmm i like your style of writing, its different.

-Naomi

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8/13/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
dramatic and errily funny. the way you write it is witty and utterly surreal. I adore the lines - "he’s got a dead flower in his mouthcheck mate-Waitwrong game

oh well, i lose anyway." - are just amazing and added so much to the poem. I adore it, fabulous lines really. I adore the whole poem. +favorite

~* noelle

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