
9/5/2005 c1 emily
once again one of your best works ever! i think you should seriously concider doing more songs like this because your talent really shines through in this. May i be so bold as to ask what this was about?
once again one of your best works ever! i think you should seriously concider doing more songs like this because your talent really shines through in this. May i be so bold as to ask what this was about?
8/17/2005 c1
39Alisha Marie
Great job on this..it's a beatifull songI try to write songs but they never come out right. Anyways great job on this! I really liked it...I hope you write more like this.
-Alisha.

Great job on this..it's a beatifull songI try to write songs but they never come out right. Anyways great job on this! I really liked it...I hope you write more like this.
-Alisha.
8/17/2005 c1
63lackluster
oh, i like it. the first verse is great. i really do like that one. awsome work, overall, great song!

oh, i like it. the first verse is great. i really do like that one. awsome work, overall, great song!
8/17/2005 c1
124in theory
Hmm I like the verses a lot, the chorus is great too but the verses, especially the second one are lovely. Great work :)

Hmm I like the verses a lot, the chorus is great too but the verses, especially the second one are lovely. Great work :)
8/16/2005 c1
155Shadowed Mind
this is really awesome, it flows naturally and doesn't sound forced. keep strong. all my love, shadowed mind

this is really awesome, it flows naturally and doesn't sound forced. keep strong. all my love, shadowed mind
8/15/2005 c1
89Lady DreamWriter
wow... I love this, you are a better songwriter than I am! Your friend should be honored to have you in their life. Friends like you are worth their weight in gold! I say this because this song proves that you really care about how much you hurt him and how sorry you are.

wow... I love this, you are a better songwriter than I am! Your friend should be honored to have you in their life. Friends like you are worth their weight in gold! I say this because this song proves that you really care about how much you hurt him and how sorry you are.
8/15/2005 c1
20Queen Isabell of Mars
So gud! You must put it to music. I would buy it the single (that's a lot from me considering I moslty download my music) ^_^v

So gud! You must put it to music. I would buy it the single (that's a lot from me considering I moslty download my music) ^_^v
8/15/2005 c1 TheLimitoftime
Brillant song alex, I Love the chorus as it echos the entire song, it has wonderful emotion throughout it.
Brillant song alex, I Love the chorus as it echos the entire song, it has wonderful emotion throughout it.
8/14/2005 c1 SuicidalGreeting
Wow Alex. This is phenomenal, not even that is good enough.
I think I'm going to e-mail to talk to you more about this. Hope you don't mind, might make you happy actually. ;)
Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting ((Who is too lazy to sign in today lol))
P.S You should start writing more songs. I think you'd do a fine job. :D
Wow Alex. This is phenomenal, not even that is good enough.
I think I'm going to e-mail to talk to you more about this. Hope you don't mind, might make you happy actually. ;)
Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting ((Who is too lazy to sign in today lol))
P.S You should start writing more songs. I think you'd do a fine job. :D
8/14/2005 c1
24Moonjava
Oh, wow. I just loved this song. It flows so well and the emotions are so deep.

Oh, wow. I just loved this song. It flows so well and the emotions are so deep.
8/14/2005 c1 Anthony Bailly
Liked it lots, its been a while since I've read something by you and this was a nice surprise, good rythming in the verses but I found it hard to get a beat to the song
Liked it lots, its been a while since I've read something by you and this was a nice surprise, good rythming in the verses but I found it hard to get a beat to the song