for My Best Friend3/24/2008 c1 
1ZeeElle
It's a little heartbreaking, a little hopeful, and refreshingly honest. I've personally seen it happen to many people, and have actually gone through it myself.
And the way you chose to present it is very honest. Sometimes, the fewer the words, the more they accurately describe the feelings involved.
I think that this was a wonderful piece!
1ZeeElleIt's a little heartbreaking, a little hopeful, and refreshingly honest. I've personally seen it happen to many people, and have actually gone through it myself.
And the way you chose to present it is very honest. Sometimes, the fewer the words, the more they accurately describe the feelings involved.
I think that this was a wonderful piece!
12/19/2007 c1 8somuchformyhappyending
aw...I'm sorry that your best friend put her boyfriend before you. that really sucks. she's not much of a best friend, then, I guess. :(
bec
8somuchformyhappyendingaw...I'm sorry that your best friend put her boyfriend before you. that really sucks. she's not much of a best friend, then, I guess. :(
bec
8/23/2005 c1 75lime215
I'm so sorry and i didnt mean to do it, if i could take it back i would but words are impossible to grab once they are set free from the cave of the mouth. i love u girl and i would never hurt u purpossily u knwo that. and i will never let a boy between us again. i promise
75lime215I'm so sorry and i didnt mean to do it, if i could take it back i would but words are impossible to grab once they are set free from the cave of the mouth. i love u girl and i would never hurt u purpossily u knwo that. and i will never let a boy between us again. i promise
8/19/2005 c1 1romancefan13
Wow, that was really good. It conveyed a lot, like a whole story, in a short format.BTW when you wrote "How could you say I'm less impotent" did you mean "important?"
1romancefan13Wow, that was really good. It conveyed a lot, like a whole story, in a short format.BTW when you wrote "How could you say I'm less impotent" did you mean "important?"
8/13/2005 c1 64Tatsu the Blade Star
A guy came between you and a friend? Tats very saddening. I always hate to see a good friendship go to waste.
I know its no consolation, but the poem was quite well written. I loved the repitition and the overall format. Good job and much happiness be upon you.
Later...
64Tatsu the Blade StarA guy came between you and a friend? Tats very saddening. I always hate to see a good friendship go to waste.
I know its no consolation, but the poem was quite well written. I loved the repitition and the overall format. Good job and much happiness be upon you.
Later...
8/13/2005 c1 79Ashes.to.Acid
I know the feeling.. my friend Heather kinda pushed me to the side when she got a boyfriend. .-.; Btw, thanks for reviewing my poem!
79Ashes.to.AcidI know the feeling.. my friend Heather kinda pushed me to the side when she got a boyfriend. .-.; Btw, thanks for reviewing my poem!