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1/30/2006 c3 79Sorrowful Dreams
this is very good. I love the sybolism in this one. great job!

~Sorrow~
10/21/2005 c1 2Mykell
I'm really in love with the first two words ^_^
10/4/2005 c3 65Thorn's-girl
"Life spreads through the dark bare space"

Excellent. I love the phrasing, and the imagery that works its way into my head. Very well done.
10/2/2005 c1 136forbidden passion
I've never read a Haiku that takes my breath away. phenomenal job.

~Jessica aka FP
9/14/2005 c2 79Sorrowful Dreams
very dark in every line and yet so powerful and great! Awesome work!

~Sorrow~
9/4/2005 c1 Sorrowful Dreams
this is really good. yes humanity did once have a garden, but then we forgot to water it.

~Sorrow~
8/24/2005 c3 6Nobody-n-Particular
Glorious ending with wonderful imagery.
8/24/2005 c3 14method acting
Amen.

Very nice imagry and great...spiritual vibe. Excellent.
8/22/2005 c3 90poetic abortion
love, love, love it. "the spiders womb bursts." wonderful and beautiful.

~* noelle
8/21/2005 c1 39iustus
I'm not going to tell you that this is good. You -know- it is, and you don't need me to tell you. You also don't need me to tell you to keep writing because in the end you will, you would only write more if someone told you not to. Am I not right?
8/21/2005 c3 Eloquent-Marionette
another great short poem thingy (tehe) good job. kw!

~davida
8/21/2005 c2 Eloquent-Marionette
aww, i forget what its called, but its when u use a non living thing and portray it as living. u did it here when you called nature a "she" i know the whole "mother nature" thing has been goin on since forever, but i love the way u put it. like she's actually real cuz she's bleeding. great decriptions and keep writin'!

~davida
8/21/2005 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
pretty, letsee, i loved the first three lines:D...KW!:P

~davida
8/21/2005 c3 612simpleplan13
cool
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