10/24/2005 c3 14Erbear-Ink
Wow that's awesome...it short, but definatly interesting! Keep it up!-erbear

8/14/2005 c1 17Galleena
Sounds a bit like Pyro the X-man... Is this going somewhere? It could be quite interesting but I think for a first chapter it's quite short and doesn't really explain much. Anyway, stick with it, you caught my attention despite my cribbing (!) and I'd like to read more about your 'firewalker'.Galleena