for One more question8/21/2005 c1 
80The Magician Joseph
Again very good, it has the same fairy tale esque feel to it, but is a gravely real matter. Very smooth and dream like flow, and nice ryhming compisition, even though it does't feel like the ryhmes are being rammed down my throat which is a good thing.
Squirrel r foreverJoseph
80The Magician JosephAgain very good, it has the same fairy tale esque feel to it, but is a gravely real matter. Very smooth and dream like flow, and nice ryhming compisition, even though it does't feel like the ryhmes are being rammed down my throat which is a good thing.
Squirrel r foreverJoseph
8/14/2005 c1 8Slowly Sinking
WOW. Very powerful, emotive piece. I love the way you break the lines uo, especially with 'For one/more/chance'; high impact writing. Great work.
8Slowly SinkingWOW. Very powerful, emotive piece. I love the way you break the lines uo, especially with 'For one/more/chance'; high impact writing. Great work.
8/14/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Heartfelt and honest. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietHeartfelt and honest. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.