
9/2/2005 c1
9jessyxyz
I like this poem! :-D No suggestions, except that there are two spelling mistakes. Keep writing! ~Jessica

I like this poem! :-D No suggestions, except that there are two spelling mistakes. Keep writing! ~Jessica
8/14/2005 c1
23La Gitane
I applaud you simply for the subject matter. It's very true, where would we be without our trusted paper?
Your ode hits upon all the wonderful potential a single piece of paper has in the right hands. (typo on line 4, though.) I love your 'ifs and whats'.
In fact, your poem has just set a couple of wheels whirring in my head - thank you!
Maybe you could do a sequel - ode to a pen?

I applaud you simply for the subject matter. It's very true, where would we be without our trusted paper?
Your ode hits upon all the wonderful potential a single piece of paper has in the right hands. (typo on line 4, though.) I love your 'ifs and whats'.
In fact, your poem has just set a couple of wheels whirring in my head - thank you!
Maybe you could do a sequel - ode to a pen?