for A Philosopher's Ultimatum10/3/2006 c1 
4K. T. Marie
Yes, YES YES THAT'S IT. I am so taping that to my religion and then to my science notebooks. do ya mind? (i'll credit, of course)
4K. T. MarieYes, YES YES THAT'S IT. I am so taping that to my religion and then to my science notebooks. do ya mind? (i'll credit, of course)
3/19/2006 c1 6McQuinn
This is a very articulate way to describe what many believe. Great job.
-McQuinn
6McQuinnThis is a very articulate way to describe what many believe. Great job.
-McQuinn
3/12/2006 c1 4theLethean
Nice! I don't think I've ever heard it put that way, but what a short and succint way of getting to the point!
4theLetheanNice! I don't think I've ever heard it put that way, but what a short and succint way of getting to the point!
11/22/2005 c1 43NinjaStoryteller
I just now noticed that this shared a title with your story. Was this going to be the theme through it? This sounds like the type of line from great thinkers that you quote so often. Using senyru-haiku format worked well, it's hard to do justice to meaningful words like these with a longer poem.
43NinjaStorytellerI just now noticed that this shared a title with your story. Was this going to be the theme through it? This sounds like the type of line from great thinkers that you quote so often. Using senyru-haiku format worked well, it's hard to do justice to meaningful words like these with a longer poem.
10/10/2005 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
Bravo on the obvious *smile*. I liked this... quick and to the point.
24Sarah-BrighteyesBravo on the obvious *smile*. I liked this... quick and to the point.
9/21/2005 c1 2temblance
Just looking at your stuff and your profile shows that you seem to be a person who really thinks deeply when writing. i loved this. For the most part, I can't gather much meaning from haikus just because they are so short, but this one really sums the whole religion/science thing up nicely...it's amazing how you got it to fit into the 5-7-5 pattern. All in all, that was really well done.
2temblanceJust looking at your stuff and your profile shows that you seem to be a person who really thinks deeply when writing. i loved this. For the most part, I can't gather much meaning from haikus just because they are so short, but this one really sums the whole religion/science thing up nicely...it's amazing how you got it to fit into the 5-7-5 pattern. All in all, that was really well done.
8/16/2005 c1 337Luthiena o Lorien
Yes, it describes what philosophers think, but I must disagree! :)Also, religion also does state HOW God created the world... But I shall not give lectures here! :)
337Luthiena o LorienYes, it describes what philosophers think, but I must disagree! :)Also, religion also does state HOW God created the world... But I shall not give lectures here! :)
8/15/2005 c1 whyette
Yay! I really liked this poem!
It was great how you managed to come up with the lines without reverting to broken sentences and whatnot.
I also liked the subject and what you're saying here!
Good Work!
Keep it up!
-Whyette
Yay! I really liked this poem!
It was great how you managed to come up with the lines without reverting to broken sentences and whatnot.
I also liked the subject and what you're saying here!
Good Work!
Keep it up!
-Whyette