for Evolution9/28/2005 c1 
38Cedar L. Arwood
You write so personally and yet somewhat openly somehow if that makes any sense, so people can relate to it. I love your simplistic and raw style. Very cool
38Cedar L. ArwoodYou write so personally and yet somewhat openly somehow if that makes any sense, so people can relate to it. I love your simplistic and raw style. Very cool
9/6/2005 c1 55The Watched
Wow...There is an element of raw emotion in your poems that appeals to me. Although I don't usually read long poems (short attention span...) I feel compelled to finish yours, almost driven on by the story itself and th need to know, as with any good book, what happens next...
If this is a real situation, which I suspect very much it is, I send you my sympathies and hope that things change for you soon. Please remember, although I have been in a similar situation, even if you feel you will never make another friend...real friendship can appear from nowhere when you need it most.
55The WatchedWow...There is an element of raw emotion in your poems that appeals to me. Although I don't usually read long poems (short attention span...) I feel compelled to finish yours, almost driven on by the story itself and th need to know, as with any good book, what happens next...
If this is a real situation, which I suspect very much it is, I send you my sympathies and hope that things change for you soon. Please remember, although I have been in a similar situation, even if you feel you will never make another friend...real friendship can appear from nowhere when you need it most.
8/18/2005 c1 101emotional-Teen
Wow this is such a kewl poem! ^_^ also thankies for reviewing my poem! This really did remind me of Star Wars in some way XD
Kel-chan
101emotional-TeenWow this is such a kewl poem! ^_^ also thankies for reviewing my poem! This really did remind me of Star Wars in some way XD
Kel-chan
8/15/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Heartfelt and honest. I loved it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietHeartfelt and honest. I loved it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.