for Speckled Glass11/3/2006 c1 
43NinjaStoryteller
Reflection.
I think I get what you mean. There is something sacred that remains with how things used to be, on a personal or global basis.
Very well done, my friend.
43NinjaStorytellerReflection.
I think I get what you mean. There is something sacred that remains with how things used to be, on a personal or global basis.
Very well done, my friend.
10/1/2006 c1 96die kleine maus
well, this new style obviously works! i loved the changes in between, from something soft and poetic ("so the breeze..." to the sudden and energetic "hop, hop their hops just don't stop") just as i loved every post-it reference. and thank you for the review you left on my other url, "the other mouse", it did make me want to expand on that poem...i guess this was just a first, and less serious, approach.
96die kleine mauswell, this new style obviously works! i loved the changes in between, from something soft and poetic ("so the breeze..." to the sudden and energetic "hop, hop their hops just don't stop") just as i loved every post-it reference. and thank you for the review you left on my other url, "the other mouse", it did make me want to expand on that poem...i guess this was just a first, and less serious, approach.
3/1/2006 c1 70Maisha Mafuriko
A writing beautiful that you have penned...
...A reminder that in the "brokennes places" in life that beauty yet remains...and to remember to take life at a slower, more valued pace.
70Maisha MafurikoA writing beautiful that you have penned...
...A reminder that in the "brokennes places" in life that beauty yet remains...and to remember to take life at a slower, more valued pace.
1/23/2006 c1 68Jesse Jacob
A great a piece here! I love the slant rhymes with "shutter/blunder." I can tell you have some really interesting ideas brewing in your head.
68Jesse JacobA great a piece here! I love the slant rhymes with "shutter/blunder." I can tell you have some really interesting ideas brewing in your head.
12/4/2005 c1 FrozenKiwi
Amazing. I especially love those last three lines. Bravoe indeed, and muchos gracias for the review!
Amazing. I especially love those last three lines. Bravoe indeed, and muchos gracias for the review!
11/23/2005 c1 55Lellida
That's pretty- I especially like that last lines. The imagery seen in the cracked glass is really pretty, and I like the dreamy feel of the poem. Some of the lines confused me, but I liked the quality and temperance of the poem.
55LellidaThat's pretty- I especially like that last lines. The imagery seen in the cracked glass is really pretty, and I like the dreamy feel of the poem. Some of the lines confused me, but I liked the quality and temperance of the poem.
11/7/2005 c1 270queenvixta
This is so beautiful and the imagery is amazing. So well written again and I really enjoyed reading it. QueenVixta
270queenvixtaThis is so beautiful and the imagery is amazing. So well written again and I really enjoyed reading it. QueenVixta
9/26/2005 c1 232Second Hand Screams
Neat. I like the simplistic beauty in the vision or whatever it was. Very nice and clear. Love the post-its references. So true, sadly true.
Here's a quote for you by an athiestic writer. I'll let you know who it was when I find where I had it written down:
"I became an athiest, not because I hater God, but because I wanted to sleep with my girlfriend."
Hey, at least he's honest!
232Second Hand ScreamsNeat. I like the simplistic beauty in the vision or whatever it was. Very nice and clear. Love the post-its references. So true, sadly true.
Here's a quote for you by an athiestic writer. I'll let you know who it was when I find where I had it written down:
"I became an athiest, not because I hater God, but because I wanted to sleep with my girlfriend."
Hey, at least he's honest!
9/15/2005 c1 Out-Of-Reality
There's one word that is a huge compliment for this poem but I can't seem to remember it so I'm just going to go with mature and extremely well-thought out. The last line really ended the poem very strongly, it has it's own sense of strength. Very awesome!
P.S. - Thanks for the review and it's been a long time since I've heard a good sherlock quote from someone who likes Anne rice. You defenitely have taste!
There's one word that is a huge compliment for this poem but I can't seem to remember it so I'm just going to go with mature and extremely well-thought out. The last line really ended the poem very strongly, it has it's own sense of strength. Very awesome!
P.S. - Thanks for the review and it's been a long time since I've heard a good sherlock quote from someone who likes Anne rice. You defenitely have taste!
9/10/2005 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
is this about post it notes? if it is, it's cutsey; i like it!i like the referance to the butterfly; it's very very cool. the butterflies make the breeze have ribbons of coloured wings; such a cool image; I love it!
39SliversofSilverPainis this about post it notes? if it is, it's cutsey; i like it!i like the referance to the butterfly; it's very very cool. the butterflies make the breeze have ribbons of coloured wings; such a cool image; I love it!
9/7/2005 c1 ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1
That was written really cool. I liked the whole feel of the poem too.
That was written really cool. I liked the whole feel of the poem too.