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9/24/2006 c1 4Walking Catastrophe
I can't say I relate to this. My friend might though. I consider life a gift and if I return it I'll regret it forever. You have some mistakes like, "That's why there's a lot of suicidals every year." It's supposed to be "That's why there are a lot of suicides every year." Either way, pretty good. Depressive, but it's okay.
6/28/2006 c1 6Jodirium
"All you have to do in your life, is die... And pax taxes."

- Signed as J.

PS- No one Call's Me Smooth, has been updated. ^^ Thanks for reviewing my stuff as well!
5/1/2006 c1 addicted2storiz
Well, I'm thrilled to know that there's someone out there like me. I've had the same thing on my mind for a while now, and I thought I might need major antidepressants. But honestly, I always wondered when you could take a break. Summer's fun but what if you to study for some stupid exam. School's nice what with friends and all, except for the bombarding of TESTS! You work your whole life, just trying to get to the next level. I asked my mom about that, she didn't get me at first, but eventually just came up with retirement leading to death. Which just confirmed what I had thought all along: Life's pointless. I mean you're having fun one second but later you'll be feeling down. Life's meaningless if it's all just a balance of ups and downs, though sometimes even that's horribly screwed up. Righto, well this is my response. I'm feeling desirable for company so feel free to email me whenever.
2/13/2006 c1 Milo Leorn
Good job! I like it a lot! You seem a lot like my good friend, Octello. Heh. Oh, you just reviewed for my story, Intense Insanity, a bit ago, and I wanted to tell you something. 1) All votes count. Your idea can still work, since I haven't gotten far enough to get all of the pairings worked out. 2) I LOVE YOUR IDEA! Really. Sorry... Jade
1/3/2006 c1 crackstasticallyinnocuous
...I don't know what's the point in life...I'm sorry you feel this way sometimes I do too. I liked this poem very much. Please continue writting!

The point in my life is to protect those that I love. Even though some may die and some have. I also want to help people when I grow older, and I also live to rub it in the faces of those who have tried to stop and kill me. ^_^

I hope you find something important in you life. It could be something great or it could be something small! Just look you'll find it!

-Corri

PS Have an awesome-o day that would kick anyone's side of holy noodles with a side of cheese of course!
11/20/2005 c1 40Romanze
whoa... that was... depressing but very good! you're view on life i guess is a little dark but it's good that you feel something unlike some people. keep writing i love this so much! it's so true!
9/26/2005 c1 chuppachupgirl
This is philosophical... and morbid... and, not surprisingly, pointless^_^. Oh yeah, the first line doesn't really make sense, thought I'd point that out.
9/4/2005 c1 1Parfume
Wow, very depressing. I guess we might have those days, but I mean, not everyday is like that.

Anyway, your poem writing is rather good. =)
8/25/2005 c1 4RomanceBabe
omg, thst's really good.

AKK! the only person i kno that likes shakespeare! and JANE EYRE! omg, i'm a spelling champ, lol *rolls eyes* WEE-HEE! LOL, KEEP UP TEH GOOD WORK!
8/17/2005 c1 14AcidxxPops
Interesting take on life, though most of it true. Although, you tend to take the pessimistic side. Don't forget, as bad as life may be at times, there are always good moments. ^^ I look forward to reading another poem if you choose to do another.-Nia
8/15/2005 c1 5unrequitedx
This is actually my first poetry, I've created in FictionPress, I would love to get reviews. This is a free-verse poetry just to say. ^^

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