for Sly Dog5/3/2008 c1 anarachillwind
yes, i will review because this is a story worth reviewing! simple and sweet, you should write more of this!Ü
yes, i will review because this is a story worth reviewing! simple and sweet, you should write more of this!Ü
4/17/2008 c1 
5Camelia Sinensis
I'm sure you know by now (after all you did get 165 reviews), but this is one amazing oneshot. Very funny and sweet.
And the characters actually exist, y'know. i was reading it and could see the whole story 'happening'.
What i wanted to say was just that, this is amzing! Congrats!
5Camelia SinensisI'm sure you know by now (after all you did get 165 reviews), but this is one amazing oneshot. Very funny and sweet.
And the characters actually exist, y'know. i was reading it and could see the whole story 'happening'.
What i wanted to say was just that, this is amzing! Congrats!
3/24/2008 c1 20Twilight Starr
Aww, adorable, fluffy story. Fitting title. It made me smile. ^^ Nice work. Good luck on writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrAww, adorable, fluffy story. Fitting title. It made me smile. ^^ Nice work. Good luck on writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~
3/11/2008 c1 18found.eventually
Okay, I am so glad I found the right piece of one-shot to read before i go collect my MAJOR MAJOR MAJOR exam results (which i'm pretty sure I did awfully). It was very lighthearted, just about the perfect length, sweet, and uhm, I don't know, original? I've never read any one-shots with plots like this before. So kudos to you! :)
18found.eventuallyOkay, I am so glad I found the right piece of one-shot to read before i go collect my MAJOR MAJOR MAJOR exam results (which i'm pretty sure I did awfully). It was very lighthearted, just about the perfect length, sweet, and uhm, I don't know, original? I've never read any one-shots with plots like this before. So kudos to you! :)
2/27/2008 c1 FamousOneLiners
loved it!
loved it!
2/22/2008 c1 BoysLikeGirls
OMG! that was one of the cutest stories I've read... I think I'll go read it again :)
OMG! that was one of the cutest stories I've read... I think I'll go read it again :)
2/18/2008 c1 Selafin
Short...simple...I loved it!
I think if it was stretched out a little, it could be really, really good!
Short...simple...I loved it!
I think if it was stretched out a little, it could be really, really good!
1/27/2008 c1 zcst4eva
Wow, (c) 2005! I'm new to fictionPress and was just randomly looking up stories when I came across your "So I got hit by a car the other day" and when I looked at your bio found this story. I love humor and I love romance and I'm a sucker for a humorous romance! You've got a great writing style and I liked the story! Keep up the great work.
Wow, (c) 2005! I'm new to fictionPress and was just randomly looking up stories when I came across your "So I got hit by a car the other day" and when I looked at your bio found this story. I love humor and I love romance and I'm a sucker for a humorous romance! You've got a great writing style and I liked the story! Keep up the great work.
1/20/2008 c1 Andriella
ACKK! I thought that was SO adorable!
Plus, I didn't even notice any run-ons, mostly because I wanted to get to the ending already!
I love the reason why he never closed her door...It's perfect!
Great writing!
ACKK! I thought that was SO adorable!
Plus, I didn't even notice any run-ons, mostly because I wanted to get to the ending already!
I love the reason why he never closed her door...It's perfect!
Great writing!
1/10/2008 c1 Realistic Dreams
I adore quirky guys, and that was so adorable! The ending might have been a bit rushed, though, but I really enjoyed the story. Don't worry about any crazy run-on sentences (I do that sometimes, too). In your case, you can argue that the sentence structure matches the peculiarity of the whole situation/storyline :]
Oh and also, I like how you didn't add any names or irrelevant personal character experiences. I felt that pretty much everything you listed about the guy did help in developing his character, as well as helped your readers form an image of him in their minds. Actually, there were some instances when I could picture the guy I like doing the funny, endearing things that your character did.
Great work! That was actually the first story that I've read by you, so I think I'm gonna go check out your other works...
I adore quirky guys, and that was so adorable! The ending might have been a bit rushed, though, but I really enjoyed the story. Don't worry about any crazy run-on sentences (I do that sometimes, too). In your case, you can argue that the sentence structure matches the peculiarity of the whole situation/storyline :]
Oh and also, I like how you didn't add any names or irrelevant personal character experiences. I felt that pretty much everything you listed about the guy did help in developing his character, as well as helped your readers form an image of him in their minds. Actually, there were some instances when I could picture the guy I like doing the funny, endearing things that your character did.
Great work! That was actually the first story that I've read by you, so I think I'm gonna go check out your other works...