for Sly Dog4/2/2011 c1 
8DorkExpress
How adorably cute!
I didn't make nnection until the end.. lol.
Loved it!
XOXO
8DorkExpressHow adorably cute!
I didn't make nnection until the end.. lol.
Loved it!
XOXO
2/23/2011 c1 i am a girl
I LOVE IT LIKE CRAZY!
I LOVE IT LIKE CRAZY!
2/8/2011 c1 letsdancewhilethiscityburns
You dont mind if I steal this doya?
Cause I really wanna take credit for this:D
Dont worry, the money can be divided 50/50;D
You dont mind if I steal this doya?
Cause I really wanna take credit for this:D
Dont worry, the money can be divided 50/50;D
2/7/2011 c1 2DreamingInNewYork
you have a one-shot with more than two hundred reviews. that's ridiculously impressive.
I've actually read this story before but never reviewed. It's really cute and I love the idea of it.
I also like how you went through the whole thing without using a name. Brilliant.
2DreamingInNewYorkyou have a one-shot with more than two hundred reviews. that's ridiculously impressive.
I've actually read this story before but never reviewed. It's really cute and I love the idea of it.
I also like how you went through the whole thing without using a name. Brilliant.
12/2/2010 c1 4sunnybunny17
To cute! I loved this, and it was amazing how you fit it all onto one oneshot. Your writing is really talented too!
Keep up the great work,
Brooke(:
ps. This is the most ammount of reviews I've seen on a oneshot:O
4sunnybunny17To cute! I loved this, and it was amazing how you fit it all onto one oneshot. Your writing is really talented too!
Keep up the great work,
Brooke(:
ps. This is the most ammount of reviews I've seen on a oneshot:O
11/28/2010 c1 Ngoc1231
I read this yesterday and I couldn't follow it at all but I get it now haha. It was probably me being so tired, and I am even tired now.
And wow, congrats on all of the reviews, seriously. I don't think I've ever seen a one shot get this many reviews.
It was very cute and the long sentences really did work well with this story.
Love the story!
~*~Ngoc1231~*~
I read this yesterday and I couldn't follow it at all but I get it now haha. It was probably me being so tired, and I am even tired now.
And wow, congrats on all of the reviews, seriously. I don't think I've ever seen a one shot get this many reviews.
It was very cute and the long sentences really did work well with this story.
Love the story!
~*~Ngoc1231~*~
10/24/2010 c1 10Burrowing Owl
sigh. I don't mind the awkward sentences at all- they make it more real. another sigh. aw! so cute*
10Burrowing Owlsigh. I don't mind the awkward sentences at all- they make it more real. another sigh. aw! so cute*
10/3/2010 c1 TheMoltenWindow
Cute, nice- liked the tense and angle you wrote it from, you could she her prespective and opinion changing :) Nice ending with the door :D
Cute, nice- liked the tense and angle you wrote it from, you could she her prespective and opinion changing :) Nice ending with the door :D
9/27/2010 c1 Moill
It's so disgustingly sweet! I love it!
It's so disgustingly sweet! I love it!
9/23/2010 c1 Gracelin
Cute! Ah, you should definitely write more like this :) Very sweet, my favorite was the part about taking her grocery shopping all the time.
Cute! Ah, you should definitely write more like this :) Very sweet, my favorite was the part about taking her grocery shopping all the time.
8/21/2010 c1 12schradez007
For being gushed out, this is so freaking cute. I would have loved more dialogue, but that's my personal quirk. Two thumbs up and a gold star. :)
12schradez007For being gushed out, this is so freaking cute. I would have loved more dialogue, but that's my personal quirk. Two thumbs up and a gold star. :)