8/24/2005 c1 23La Gitane
Oh, you really did it! How wonderful! :)

I like the alliteration in the fourth line - it gives it a sense of contrasting sound between all those verbs around it. And of course, again, the subject matter is so true.

Maybe use the word mediator or conveyor instead of transferer?

(My idea was spawning out into a little fic about a love story between a pen and paper!)

Thank you, and lots of love! :)