
10/9/2005 c1
174marshbar960
sitting alone in your room, gazing deep into your mind and heart when ideas pace back and forth, just wishing to escape. suddenly, you get pen and paper and the ideas start stampeding like children exciting school for the summer. very interesting write here. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
p.s. God loves you and so do I!

sitting alone in your room, gazing deep into your mind and heart when ideas pace back and forth, just wishing to escape. suddenly, you get pen and paper and the ideas start stampeding like children exciting school for the summer. very interesting write here. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
p.s. God loves you and so do I!
8/18/2005 c1
15liz anya
Interesting. I like this. Even the topic is a little bit on the cliche side (I've seen a lot of poems about poems and haikus about haikus, etc.) it seems very original because the content is... different. Love the rhyming, love the flow. Marvelous piece here!

Interesting. I like this. Even the topic is a little bit on the cliche side (I've seen a lot of poems about poems and haikus about haikus, etc.) it seems very original because the content is... different. Love the rhyming, love the flow. Marvelous piece here!
8/16/2005 c1
16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
A lovely poem. A tribute to poems and poets everywhere. And the subject you chose is very unique. I've never seen a poem written about a POEM! Nicely done.^_^

A lovely poem. A tribute to poems and poets everywhere. And the subject you chose is very unique. I've never seen a poem written about a POEM! Nicely done.^_^