for What If4/7/2006 c1 
50ScarletDreamer
Amazing, yet again. This, so far, i believe is one of your best poems I've read. :) Magnifique!
(*ScarletDreamer*)
50ScarletDreamerAmazing, yet again. This, so far, i believe is one of your best poems I've read. :) Magnifique!
(*ScarletDreamer*)
8/16/2005 c1 14Getuie
This poem reminded me of "What if His people prayed?" from Casting Crowns. I can see where you're coming from in writing this. I don't know why.. but I would like to see you do some nonrhyming poetry also. I know it's sometimes a challenge to work through, but I just have this feeling that you'll do very good at it. I think one thing that kinda took the impact away from this piece was the rhymning - at least for me. Not that it was bad, not at all. It posed strong questions that many of us need to think about *hugs*
This is from a Anti-Bush, Pro-life, Bring-God-Back-Into-Schools, Stop-Being-So-Bloody-Stubborn writer. (Sorry, I saw your previous writer and couldn't resist)
14GetuieThis poem reminded me of "What if His people prayed?" from Casting Crowns. I can see where you're coming from in writing this. I don't know why.. but I would like to see you do some nonrhyming poetry also. I know it's sometimes a challenge to work through, but I just have this feeling that you'll do very good at it. I think one thing that kinda took the impact away from this piece was the rhymning - at least for me. Not that it was bad, not at all. It posed strong questions that many of us need to think about *hugs*
This is from a Anti-Bush, Pro-life, Bring-God-Back-Into-Schools, Stop-Being-So-Bloody-Stubborn writer. (Sorry, I saw your previous writer and couldn't resist)
8/16/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I like it; it was a little on the frilly side for what you were trying to say, but I enjoyed it.here's my stand-up moment.This review is from an:Anti-BusherPro-AbortionerSave-The-PlantetGive-Poetry-To-Childrenwriter.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietI like it; it was a little on the frilly side for what you were trying to say, but I enjoyed it.here's my stand-up moment.This review is from an:Anti-BusherPro-AbortionerSave-The-PlantetGive-Poetry-To-Childrenwriter.
Much love,Juliet.