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11/9/2005 c1 KaronePrincess
Hey, it's me, KaronePrincess.

This story is AWESOME!

I love the "girl" she is so carefree and she even challenge the prince! She quite clever! I actually laughed at this part,

Still glaring, the girl said, “Get off my land! Get off!” She flourished that statement with a stamp of her foot. At that, the prince laughed. Some village girl was telling him to get off ‘her land?’

He didn’t reply, just sat there. Bad choice; she kicked him.

That was so FUNNY and HUMOR. I LOVE IT!

She has no idea that he's a prince! She is very clever! I love her!

Please update more! Please continue this story!

My email is

11/1/2005 c5 9Alteng
I went to bed this morning, and I realised that I missed two stories in reviewing. Oh well, here I am now for that!

I guess the girls are really in a mess now. The princies are all interested in them. Islana was the one that got the rescue that she didn't want, wasn't she. I like her the best, mind you.
10/25/2005 c1 1rrmehta364
srry, i just reread the review i sent you about secrets in the moor and realized im really not quite as smart as i thought i was. after not having read this story for a while, when u mentioned gaelic i automatically connected it to ireland when this story is really in scotland. wow, thts embarassing. anyways, based on the language (the great vowel shift of 1550 announcing the beginning of modern english) means the the story should be around the war of the three kingdoms and the scottish civil war and glorious revolution. at around this point the gaelic spoken by the scots had become primarily a form of middle english. my understanding of english development may be off, since im too lazy to look it up, but the point is before you write anything historical, do research. if you had done research, i ask for my sincerest apologies for insulting your intelligence. really, im sorry. anyways, im a history buff and a bit of a stickler for things like this so sorry.
10/15/2005 c5 19Lara Bykirk
I like this story...I just wish that there was a little more connection between the various plots, other than that everyone was at the ball. Maybe that's my fault for reading each chapter weeks apart, but it would be appreciated.
10/10/2005 c5 20Pheobe Meryll
Oh Cadis Cadis what's goin on now?

Yay, Islana and Ashenan are gonna get together! Hmm...hope he doesn't find out her little disguise. But I trust Eiran not to let anything bad happen. There's something very likeable about him...all your characters are very likeable.

I hope the next post comes soon! I'm itching to see what happens next...
9/20/2005 c4 9Alteng
Ah, but we kind of figured that Cadis hated Ander, but is this a love-hate relationship. I kind of wonder what Cadis is up to.
9/10/2005 c4 19Lara Bykirk
This story is getting much better as it goes along. I like the way all of the characters are meeting up and crossing paths, etc. I really like the Cadis/Ander...potential romance? Very interesting.
9/9/2005 c4 8bulletproof.cupid
haha i love this. it's certainly amusing especially for ander and cadis. i love their names! gah, how did you think them up =O

i felt so bad for chales. hah prince charles of england ;o) but yeah, forbidden love hurt a lot, especially when you're trying so hard to deny your feelings. i especially pity allie. i mean, how long till she stops running?

lol, it's seems like everyone is partnered now =) it's really cute! but yeah, my favourite remains ander and cadis. i guess it's the whole love/hate relationship that gets to me.

omg hun, thanks so much for review. i wanted to email you seperately about it but since your email wasn't up, i decided to read this (and it's awesome!) and post my comments up as well. what can i say? i was so blown away by your honest review. gah i loves you! i thought the appology happened to quick as well, maybe i wanted it out of the way. but yes, i've fixed it up now and i must say, you will make one helluva editor or beta if you choose to =D i felt so humbled and am certainly proud to have a reader like you reviewing my stuff. wow *hugs*

well hun, take care! you have to update this fic soon. i really like it, there are many people but then again they all meet up at some point. there's a main theme as well: love! lol, yeah any dummy could have guessed that right? =P so take care and i look forward to hearing from you soon =)

9/9/2005 c4 12Lccorp2

Lord Duffikus:

Can't really think of anything to say, so just reviewing to let you know that someone's reading this.

Good day to you, and happy writing.
9/8/2005 c4 20Pheobe Meryll
Hm... Think there might be a little attraction going on there...:)I think I like Cadis.

He lost his button? That was...interesting but funny.

I think a little more explination might help the reader keep better track of the characters. I found this chapter fast-paced at times. Love your style, though!
9/2/2005 c3 19Lara Bykirk
Hmm...it's still a little hard to keep characters apart; since most of your readers here will be reading the chapters several weeks apart, as you post them up, you might want to add in subtle reminders as to what the characters are all trying to do. But you certainly wouldn't have to; it's still a great story. I'm very amused by all the characters meeting and splitting up and meeting again.
9/2/2005 c3 9Alteng
Cinderella, how cute!

Isana kind of sticks out, doesn't she. So, how did she get an invitation? And two of the princes have a thing for peasant girls. Hey, the middle prince is probably destinied for Cadis, it seems.

So, I wonder what Elloise is looking for.
9/1/2005 c3 undercover-angel96
wow... lots of plots of forbidden love. Islana sounds like a great character. update soon!

9/1/2005 c1 undercover-angel96
interesting start, i really like the character names ^^

9/1/2005 c3 20Pheobe Meryll
I sympathize with Islana. I'm a bad dancer, too.

You wrote that Cadis was "all and fair"..you prolly meant "fair and all"...?

I'm beginning to like this format of all these subplots at once. It seems that they must all find common ground sooner or later. Good story!
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