for Lilacs10/13/2005 c1 simpletonsgrin
It was simple and had this sort of clean and airy feel to it. The second stanza stayed with me, and i felt the rest just couldn't compare. That in itself is not a true criticism- certain things always look dull next to something brightly shining.
-simpleton
It was simple and had this sort of clean and airy feel to it. The second stanza stayed with me, and i felt the rest just couldn't compare. That in itself is not a true criticism- certain things always look dull next to something brightly shining.
-simpleton
8/30/2005 c1 
1dear rowan
id expect something like this from a published author. the theme of the poem intrigues me. also did you mean to make this piece somewhat like a sonnet? the first two lines of every stanza are roughly 10 syllables. i found that very cool. love the line,"its cut glass vase reflects like perfect teardrops" youre super.
1dear rowanid expect something like this from a published author. the theme of the poem intrigues me. also did you mean to make this piece somewhat like a sonnet? the first two lines of every stanza are roughly 10 syllables. i found that very cool. love the line,"its cut glass vase reflects like perfect teardrops" youre super.