for And Lie on Demand7/8/2015 c1 Guest
Loved this so much :-)
Loved this so much :-)
5/4/2012 c1 Kaila
Wow! i really loved this story. it was great!
any chance at all that you continued it/will continue _?
It's actually really amazing how you created such a vivid image of a whole different world in just a one-shot :D
it was really well done :)
Wow! i really loved this story. it was great!
any chance at all that you continued it/will continue _?
It's actually really amazing how you created such a vivid image of a whole different world in just a one-shot :D
it was really well done :)
3/1/2011 c1 Rustaam
This was adorable and I enjoy all tales about knights! I just wish you continued this story just a little longer in the plot.
This was adorable and I enjoy all tales about knights! I just wish you continued this story just a little longer in the plot.
8/29/2009 c1 Greennathaniel
Gosh I wish there was more to this... More to all of your stories actually.
They're just so brilliant.
Gosh I wish there was more to this... More to all of your stories actually.
They're just so brilliant.
1/5/2009 c1 nomy
ok..that a cool story!..i think you make a mistake here...
"He limply threw the reins back at Sir William and turned to find Hell Demon."..notice the Sir William name comes here but in fact it supposed to be Sir Benny..
anywho~~ Kinda slow at first of the starting and you in my opinion done a great job of picking up the pace and explaining the details in the end of the story..but its a pity its just a one shot..coz kinda wanted to know more about Harley life..i just think he is that cute and wizardy..LOL..and with a knight in the mix..just perfect!..
ok..that a cool story!..i think you make a mistake here...
"He limply threw the reins back at Sir William and turned to find Hell Demon."..notice the Sir William name comes here but in fact it supposed to be Sir Benny..
anywho~~ Kinda slow at first of the starting and you in my opinion done a great job of picking up the pace and explaining the details in the end of the story..but its a pity its just a one shot..coz kinda wanted to know more about Harley life..i just think he is that cute and wizardy..LOL..and with a knight in the mix..just perfect!..
12/23/2008 c1 oo
ok, so its been like 3 years, and still, i come back to this story every year. its affected me strongly. its one of my favorites. i love it. i cherish it. i wish it was a novel.
well, i just wanted to say,
HAPPY HOLIDAYS AND KEEP WRITING, YOURE GREAT AT IT.
ok, so its been like 3 years, and still, i come back to this story every year. its affected me strongly. its one of my favorites. i love it. i cherish it. i wish it was a novel.
well, i just wanted to say,
HAPPY HOLIDAYS AND KEEP WRITING, YOURE GREAT AT IT.
5/25/2008 c1 
5Curb Crasher
It was cute and made me feel squishy!
But at the end you stated:
'He limply threw the reins back at Sir William and turned to find Hell Demon.'
I think you meant:
'He limply threw the reins back at Sir Benny and turned to find Hell Demon.'
Thank you for writing!
5Curb CrasherIt was cute and made me feel squishy!
But at the end you stated:
'He limply threw the reins back at Sir William and turned to find Hell Demon.'
I think you meant:
'He limply threw the reins back at Sir Benny and turned to find Hell Demon.'
Thank you for writing!
5/18/2008 c1 spoonring
this is such a great story!
but a short one...
which i bet you could turn into a Great long story! it has so much and all the potential to be a chapter spender.
rereading it for about my 7th time since you posted it so long ago.
this is such a great story!
but a short one...
which i bet you could turn into a Great long story! it has so much and all the potential to be a chapter spender.
rereading it for about my 7th time since you posted it so long ago.
3/8/2008 c1 4Seque Me ad Meum Somnium
I really love this story. Some of your others are really great too, but this one...OH! I just come back and read it when I'm feeling really down or the day before I have to do something really unpleasant because it just gives me warm fuzzy feelings!
4Seque Me ad Meum SomniumI really love this story. Some of your others are really great too, but this one...OH! I just come back and read it when I'm feeling really down or the day before I have to do something really unpleasant because it just gives me warm fuzzy feelings!