for Fanta girls and skimpy Clothing6/29/2006 c3 la elfa
hi! the story´s nice! hope no one gets hurt! always happens so at camps... hum...(grins wikedly)
hi! the story´s nice! hope no one gets hurt! always happens so at camps... hum...(grins wikedly)
9/21/2005 c3 
2miss understanding
Oh my god, they're all laughing psychos! ^_~ it's amusing but rather distrubing.
Stereotypes are there for a reason. They wouldn't be there if they weren't true at least for some of the time. Don't worry about it! lol.
omg, this title is funny. XD Well, toodles! ~Choco
2miss understandingOh my god, they're all laughing psychos! ^_~ it's amusing but rather distrubing.
Stereotypes are there for a reason. They wouldn't be there if they weren't true at least for some of the time. Don't worry about it! lol.
omg, this title is funny. XD Well, toodles! ~Choco
9/21/2005 c1 miss understanding
lol...the fanta girls do wear skimpy clothing. I've always thought that they looked like 'go-go' girls from the sixties and seventies.
A sneer can sort of be like a smile, but it's a nasty smile and usually carries negotive connotations. You're right, though, there's only four basic words for smile. That really doesn't seem fair since there's so many ways of smiling...
lol...the fanta girls do wear skimpy clothing. I've always thought that they looked like 'go-go' girls from the sixties and seventies.
A sneer can sort of be like a smile, but it's a nasty smile and usually carries negotive connotations. You're right, though, there's only four basic words for smile. That really doesn't seem fair since there's so many ways of smiling...
8/28/2005 c1 4stroke in a can
Before I say anything else; I hate those Fanta commercials. They're soo annoying and I swear they have subliminal messages.
erh. about the actual story, since I've only read the first chapter I suppose I haven't got much to say other than it was a nice beginning.
4stroke in a canBefore I say anything else; I hate those Fanta commercials. They're soo annoying and I swear they have subliminal messages.
erh. about the actual story, since I've only read the first chapter I suppose I haven't got much to say other than it was a nice beginning.
8/19/2005 c3 Guest
update son it's really good *pokes* hah you're it!
update son it's really good *pokes* hah you're it!
8/19/2005 c3 18Tera McCaslin
Welcome! She is an uberbitch.
MWAHAHA, my thesaurus is teh shiznet -cough- I'm so glad you like it! I will update it soon, I have chapter 4 written already, but I don't know when I can post it (School, the uberstealer of free time). I'm so glad you updated! -squeals in excitement and sounds like a moron-
~tera
18Tera McCaslinWelcome! She is an uberbitch.
MWAHAHA, my thesaurus is teh shiznet -cough- I'm so glad you like it! I will update it soon, I have chapter 4 written already, but I don't know when I can post it (School, the uberstealer of free time). I'm so glad you updated! -squeals in excitement and sounds like a moron-
~tera
8/19/2005 c3 imthetree
this seems interesting, the only thing i can think of is that theres not really alot of detail into who the people are and there histories.. maybe thats coming along later, but other than that its really good and i'll keep reading if you keep updating...
this seems interesting, the only thing i can think of is that theres not really alot of detail into who the people are and there histories.. maybe thats coming along later, but other than that its really good and i'll keep reading if you keep updating...
8/18/2005 c2 Tera McCaslin
W00t! I can't wait for you to update. Which you'd best do. MWAHA.
By the way, thanks for reading "torn apart"!
~tera
W00t! I can't wait for you to update. Which you'd best do. MWAHA.
By the way, thanks for reading "torn apart"!
~tera
8/18/2005 c1 Tera McCaslin
I read your author's notes. Mwaha, my thesaurus has about 12 diff synonyms for smile...
This was really good, I must read the next chapter!
~tera
I read your author's notes. Mwaha, my thesaurus has about 12 diff synonyms for smile...
This was really good, I must read the next chapter!
~tera