1/8/2006 c1 7Alankria
Though I haven't read the Beowulf poem, I nonetheless found this piece incredible. Such intensity and vivid description, things I rarely find on this site and even in published fiction. My only complaint is a technical one: your use of "it's". "It's" is *only* used as an abbreviation for "it is", never as a possessive form of "it". You should use "its" for possession - EG: 'its pointed teeth.' It is the only case where possession doesn't carry an apostrophe. But technical mistakes aside, a fantastic piece.