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10/15/2005 c6 79Sorrowful Dreams
you're lucky I understand german haha. but I like this. very well written and I love the flow to it. yes...sometimes there is little hope in this world. a nut mother? wow...

~Sorrow~
10/15/2005 c5 Sorrowful Dreams
time can mean so much, but time can never be on your side no matter what. I like this one cuz some how to me, it proved that point.

~Sorrow~
10/15/2005 c4 Sorrowful Dreams
this one is very well written. Sometimes it does happen when you think it's just the other person...then you join in on what they're doin.

~Sorrow~
10/15/2005 c3 Sorrowful Dreams
I like this one even though it wasn't exactly a poem. but it's good cuz I can really relate and understand what you're going through.

~Sorrow~
10/15/2005 c2 Sorrowful Dreams
once again reminds me of the same song. but I love this one. it has the great emotional detail that made me think...

~Sorrow~
10/15/2005 c1 Sorrowful Dreams
very well written. some how the line "hold my hand as I go under, breath for me" reminds me of the song I just posted not too long ago called, "breath on your own" but great work! I like it a lot!

~Sorrow~
9/7/2005 c5 6Nobody-n-Particular
A hidden depth.
9/7/2005 c3 Nobody-n-Particular
A sense of isolation.
9/7/2005 c2 Nobody-n-Particular
Breathing is all it takes.
9/7/2005 c1 Nobody-n-Particular
I want to stop time.
8/19/2005 c1 31Freddie of Albion
Moving...as always...
8/19/2005 c3 14Tell me its not true
i completely get what you mean, i went through a depressed phase, and on the other side it seems almost void
8/19/2005 c1 Tell me its not true
i love the line 'hold my hand as i go under' it just brings perfect imagery

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