for Maeror2/25/2006 c2 
20S.J.Jones
I like how this story is seperated into the different people, it makes it more interesting.
20S.J.JonesI like how this story is seperated into the different people, it makes it more interesting.
2/23/2006 c7 65SarahJaneDrkAngl05
o that thing is mean! hmm i wonder what hes up too? guess ill just have to keep reading to find out hehe. :p
~SarahJane
65SarahJaneDrkAngl05o that thing is mean! hmm i wonder what hes up too? guess ill just have to keep reading to find out hehe. :p
~SarahJane
2/23/2006 c5 SarahJaneDrkAngl05
cool i like how Alair can change forms and how his eyes are still red thats awesome.
~SarahJane
cool i like how Alair can change forms and how his eyes are still red thats awesome.
~SarahJane
2/23/2006 c4 SarahJaneDrkAngl05
no wonder she didnt want ppl knowing her name! i cant wait to read more!
~SarahJane
no wonder she didnt want ppl knowing her name! i cant wait to read more!
~SarahJane
2/23/2006 c1 SarahJaneDrkAngl05
this is pretty good and i like how you wrote a little about each character. cant wait to read more!
~SarahJane
this is pretty good and i like how you wrote a little about each character. cant wait to read more!
~SarahJane
9/27/2005 c6 I dont remember my username
*laughs* I think I remember this, I'll review the whole thing later but I'm too lazy to right now!
*laughs* I think I remember this, I'll review the whole thing later but I'm too lazy to right now!
9/2/2005 c4 Diana
...For shame...*Shakes head at you*
...For shame...*Shakes head at you*
9/2/2005 c4 inhyel
Yay for Talio! For the Emperor! *Gets stabbed*
Yay for Talio! For the Emperor! *Gets stabbed*
9/2/2005 c4 5aqua-angel
Wow, great read you guys ^^ I love the humour in the story hehe Even with 6 authors, everything ran pretty smoothly~ kudos on that =)
I'm curious to the plot and where you're taking it. One thing I'd like to mention though is dialogue. At times, the language tugs a bit. All these characters are from the same time, though not the same place, but should be speaking generally the same way. Does that make sense? I noticed some used formal language while sometimes there was language or slang that you would use today. I hope this is making sense...
What I liked the most in the story was character interaction~ it's really cute and funny. I just love the ironic scene of the two guys fighting to death (or unconciousness xD) while in the background, the three girls are skipping and singing.
Anyways, good job with the story and keep it up ^^ Happy writings!
5aqua-angelWow, great read you guys ^^ I love the humour in the story hehe Even with 6 authors, everything ran pretty smoothly~ kudos on that =)
I'm curious to the plot and where you're taking it. One thing I'd like to mention though is dialogue. At times, the language tugs a bit. All these characters are from the same time, though not the same place, but should be speaking generally the same way. Does that make sense? I noticed some used formal language while sometimes there was language or slang that you would use today. I hope this is making sense...
What I liked the most in the story was character interaction~ it's really cute and funny. I just love the ironic scene of the two guys fighting to death (or unconciousness xD) while in the background, the three girls are skipping and singing.
Anyways, good job with the story and keep it up ^^ Happy writings!
8/29/2005 c3 inhye
Why did I not post in this chapter? I must have been gone...in Denver! Yes, that's right, Denver! I just love Flyne's posts in this chappy. Ha.)
~inhyel
P.S.: If you have time, go look at my fanfiction account, the profile
Why did I not post in this chapter? I must have been gone...in Denver! Yes, that's right, Denver! I just love Flyne's posts in this chappy. Ha.)
~inhyel
P.S.: If you have time, go look at my fanfiction account, the profile