
1/18/2015 c6
97rust phoenix
this resonates strongly with traditional haiku. you do a good job with taking traditional motifs and making them personal.

this resonates strongly with traditional haiku. you do a good job with taking traditional motifs and making them personal.
1/18/2015 c5 rust phoenix
These images fit the ideas very well. The words seem to sparkle as they move from the transience of mist to the solidity of jewels.
These images fit the ideas very well. The words seem to sparkle as they move from the transience of mist to the solidity of jewels.
1/24/2012 c6 Aquafied
2005, how time flies and flies. I googled my fiction press page because I forgot my login. Oh fiction press, how i missed you.
-Aquafied
2005, how time flies and flies. I googled my fiction press page because I forgot my login. Oh fiction press, how i missed you.
-Aquafied
9/19/2006 c4
31Dark-Night-Tigress
Have I said how much I love this one? Well, even in case I didn't, I do. Keep it up, you obviously have a lot of talent with words.

Have I said how much I love this one? Well, even in case I didn't, I do. Keep it up, you obviously have a lot of talent with words.
8/18/2006 c6
270dustytiger
love it as per usual, i never know what to say, but i love it thanks for the reviews

love it as per usual, i never know what to say, but i love it thanks for the reviews
8/18/2006 c5 dustytiger
seriously digging your hiaku you totally have a gift for it cause i always like what you write and it always makes think hm... why do i hate haiku so much?
seriously digging your hiaku you totally have a gift for it cause i always like what you write and it always makes think hm... why do i hate haiku so much?
8/13/2006 c6
29diffident
Aquafied is a good friend of mine (outside of FictionPress; we're former classmates) and this sums her up so very aptly. All her interpretations and tiny little references tucked safely within her poetry, as numerous as buds and as pure as white. This is so skillful a haiku once the meaning is unraveled.
marie

Aquafied is a good friend of mine (outside of FictionPress; we're former classmates) and this sums her up so very aptly. All her interpretations and tiny little references tucked safely within her poetry, as numerous as buds and as pure as white. This is so skillful a haiku once the meaning is unraveled.
marie