10/21/2005 c1 7Alankria
Typos aside, this was a very well written piece. You managed to capture the emotions perfectly, intertwining past and present to create a very tragic story. I am glad that Kyle forgave her.
Typos aside, this was a very well written piece. You managed to capture the emotions perfectly, intertwining past and present to create a very tragic story. I am glad that Kyle forgave her.
9/12/2005 c1 misunderstoodlove
I love this i almost criedit was great!
I love this i almost criedit was great!
8/20/2005 c1 Taco Bell
Very cool, Very sad. Sounds familiar. characters r familiar, and so is the whole story. i like it very much! good job, im ganna start reading ur other stories! good luck!
Very cool, Very sad. Sounds familiar. characters r familiar, and so is the whole story. i like it very much! good job, im ganna start reading ur other stories! good luck!
8/20/2005 c1 Smexy Noice Nyes
holy cow i love this!
very, VERY sad! very!
muchly loves it!
holy cow i love this!
very, VERY sad! very!
muchly loves it!