for Will you Shut up?9/1/2005 c1 the writer 2005
its kinda weird no offense but sometimes i feel the same way
its kinda weird no offense but sometimes i feel the same way
8/24/2005 c1 
168SeaVoi
I like your use of underlined and bold words and lines, it really adds something.
168SeaVoiI like your use of underlined and bold words and lines, it really adds something.
8/22/2005 c1 13KwazyKandyPie
very good, i like it! i like these lines,"I can't take this...
So I stood and yelled...
"Shut up!"
Everyone stared at me everyone was dead slient.
Finally a little peace...
I shead a tear, a tear of joy.
This is what I always wanted"
keep up the great work. -kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
13KwazyKandyPievery good, i like it! i like these lines,"I can't take this...
So I stood and yelled...
"Shut up!"
Everyone stared at me everyone was dead slient.
Finally a little peace...
I shead a tear, a tear of joy.
This is what I always wanted"
keep up the great work. -kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
8/21/2005 c1 44putz-6
This is a great poem I can kind of relate to it ^_^ Also thanks for the review.
44putz-6This is a great poem I can kind of relate to it ^_^ Also thanks for the review.
8/21/2005 c1 33aeolyn
Wow. Lots of emotions in this poem. Loved the fact that it's easy to relate too. There were a few typos, but not much.
In the line "Do these people understand the meaning of the word quite?" did you mean "quiet"?
"I shead a tear, a tear of joy." Maybe "shed a tear"?
other than that, great job!
33aeolynWow. Lots of emotions in this poem. Loved the fact that it's easy to relate too. There were a few typos, but not much.
In the line "Do these people understand the meaning of the word quite?" did you mean "quiet"?
"I shead a tear, a tear of joy." Maybe "shed a tear"?
other than that, great job!