for Before and After12/1/2005 c1 
28emilyrachel18
I love the message behind all of these different cinareos and the way you write it is so personal i could almost imagine that you have lived out each one. However in places the rhythm is slightly off but it doesn't take away from the depth of the poem. I like it Alex
28emilyrachel18I love the message behind all of these different cinareos and the way you write it is so personal i could almost imagine that you have lived out each one. However in places the rhythm is slightly off but it doesn't take away from the depth of the poem. I like it Alex
9/22/2005 c1 Ahemait
wow...this was most definielty my afvourite of yours. i loved how you had the two parts and the imagery you created was amazing. i dont know what else i can really say, but...wow.
wow...this was most definielty my afvourite of yours. i loved how you had the two parts and the imagery you created was amazing. i dont know what else i can really say, but...wow.
9/8/2005 c1 117xHannahx
i havent looked at your stuff recently, but this is well worth the wait. its as fantastic as it is different to ur norm. great!
Han.
117xHannahxi havent looked at your stuff recently, but this is well worth the wait. its as fantastic as it is different to ur norm. great!
Han.
9/5/2005 c1 emily
wow another one of your best! this is amazing you have the rhyming scheme perfect and the content is just unbelievable! it leaves my mind thinkng what inspired you to write it i just have to know! txt me!
wow another one of your best! this is amazing you have the rhyming scheme perfect and the content is just unbelievable! it leaves my mind thinkng what inspired you to write it i just have to know! txt me!
8/24/2005 c1 298Moon-Chaser
Wow. Such description and the blood throughout the poem. Beautifully done. I love it.
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserWow. Such description and the blood throughout the poem. Beautifully done. I love it.
Keep it up.
8/23/2005 c1 Anthony
Lovely poem, thought the first part was definitely better than the second, but both were excellent, really enjoyed it, keep it up
Lovely poem, thought the first part was definitely better than the second, but both were excellent, really enjoyed it, keep it up
8/21/2005 c1 63lackluster
wow, it is different from your style, but i like it. it paints such blood-colord pictures to me. amazing.
63lacklusterwow, it is different from your style, but i like it. it paints such blood-colord pictures to me. amazing.
8/21/2005 c1 dancingintherain
beautiful, came from your heart-
beautiful, came from your heart-