for Slice of Life1/7/2006 c1 
16Cheeseraptor5
Wow. One of my favorite styles of writing is using pages and pages of non-wasted words to describe something simple - in this case eating pie. And you pulled it off well.
16Cheeseraptor5Wow. One of my favorite styles of writing is using pages and pages of non-wasted words to describe something simple - in this case eating pie. And you pulled it off well.
9/26/2005 c1 17Galleena
Okay, At first I thought 'wow randomness' and 'what happened to the end of that sentence' and 'm.. pie' and it becomes her wrist. Wow! I don't see that one coming.
I've read one of the poems on your look-up. The one about the cold plums. Actually we studied it for Junior Cert but it's an odd poem. All the others we read where about dandelions representing invading forces and the like. But not that one. Just thought I'd share that with you!
Stick with it,
Galleena
17GalleenaOkay, At first I thought 'wow randomness' and 'what happened to the end of that sentence' and 'm.. pie' and it becomes her wrist. Wow! I don't see that one coming.
I've read one of the poems on your look-up. The one about the cold plums. Actually we studied it for Junior Cert but it's an odd poem. All the others we read where about dandelions representing invading forces and the like. But not that one. Just thought I'd share that with you!
Stick with it,
Galleena
9/11/2005 c1 1spicketstill
Oh my gosh. That was amazing. It's so poetic, and darkly funny - and the last paragraph, my gosh! You totally got me. It was a really striking piece.
1spicketstillOh my gosh. That was amazing. It's so poetic, and darkly funny - and the last paragraph, my gosh! You totally got me. It was a really striking piece.
8/28/2005 c1 12meitnerium
oh my lord! what an ending! so amazing! i love it! creepy no? but really, i love it! love it love it love it!...yay!
12meitneriumoh my lord! what an ending! so amazing! i love it! creepy no? but really, i love it! love it love it love it!...yay!