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8/21/2005 c1 9Lavender Bell
Very clever and a good read. I especially like Jacques for some reason, I'm not entirely sure why...maybe because I liked the way he just kept talking while Randy was going to pieces. That, and his last name made me smile a little. Keep up the good work. :)
8/21/2005 c1 finished
I liked this, but I didn't quite get the ending, did Randy make a deal with Jack, to keep out of Purgatory? I think so, but maybe not. Anyway, it had good descriptive language and I liked the way he had to sign his way out of Purgatory, if that was the case. Good work!

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